Poe

...a senryu

Poe

 

 

Thus orphaned, he was.

A master of the macabre.

Of death, foreboding.

Author's Note

I initially thought the pronunciation of "macabre" was three syllables. After looking it up on Google, I learned it is actually two.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

simple and profound ... just like a senryu ;))) ... we love Poe don't we .. his dark foreboding emanations .. omens and still human .. and so we love him ... crazy eh!? you inspired me to brush up a bit on his life and i found this in wikipedia "the cause of his death is unknown and has been variously attributed to alcohol, "brain congestion", cholera, drugs, heart disease, rabies, suicide, tuberculosis, and other causes.[4]" at the ripe old age of 40 ... wow! when i was growing up the life expectancy of men (my Da) was 60 something yrs old ... cookies and cream to ya :) ... and tricks and treats too
E.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I didn't realize he was so young when he died. What in the world is "brain congestion" anyway? I guess its only fitting that his death be a mystery. Thanks, Gene!

[Einstein Noodle]

i don't know!!! something like "consumption' i suppose ... or today's diagnosis of ADHD for figiting children ..a catch all for we don't know :{

[Jibey]

It seemed appropriate to write three short lines about a man whose name consisted of only 3 letters. It seems that three lines is enough. A telling, succinct epitaph.

[Kelly Scheppers]

A most perceptive observation, Jibey. Thank you!

[John the Baptist]

I don't think he ever got over sleeping in the same room with his mother as she was dying.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I never knew that. Thank you, John.

[Dara]

A perfect subject for this time of year and wonderfully put together. You have captured Poe's essence in just a few lines. By the way, I used to think 'macabre' had 3 syllables too. You are not alone :-)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Lol, it just looks like it would be three. Thank you, Dara!

[R.E. Ray]

Kelly, this is a remarkable work. The black and white portrait above your poem, and the font, make this a truly unique artwork. It's difficult to move the reader with three short lines, but you've succeeded.

[Kelly Scheppers]

A thousand thank yous, dear Robert!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this captures his persona like a lonely wailing raven at midnight.
j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I must say, he had a most hypnotic stare. At first glance, I knew this was the photo I wanted. Thank you so, so much, Jacob!

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words dear Kelly. Poe, one of the greats. Like my favorite writer, Salinger. Left us with mystery and wonder. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Kelly Scheppers]

Many thanks, John...and many blessings!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Kelly.

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, it is two syllables. Ma-cob is the pronunciation. Well written tribute in senryu form, Kelly. You have certain authors and celebs you pay tribute to with your poetry and they are always a pleasure to read. Lydi**

[Kelly Scheppers]

This came from a very "classic" afternoon of writing. I wrote a piece about Emily Dickinson, then wrote this one on Poe. Thank you for a most kind review, Lydi... that is deeply appreciated!

[Robert Trakofler]

Ha ha Kelly... I think he might like that on his headstone... I will have to ask him:) next raven I see I will

[Kelly Scheppers]

I was contemplating waiting till Halloween to post it, but I couldn't resist. Please, do let me know what the raven says! Thanks ever so much, Robert!

[Robert Trakofler]

well I asked them....
https://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Flaccidbunny/2150703/?&p=3

[NotUsinganymore]

Very interesting poem. c: I enjoyed it a lot.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You are most kind, JungLee. Thank you!