Kelly, first I apologize for such a late review. I read this one shortly after you posted it and thought I’d left a review.
Yes, you are a poet! And, in these few words capture the magic of poetry, the silent pain we bleed onto pages, redeemed later with the moon’s distant influence. A literal success, I say.
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Ok, that’s weird. I didn’t see my previous review until I posted this one! Well, lucky you... tw.. read moreOk, that’s weird. I didn’t see my previous review until I posted this one! Well, lucky you... two reviews. ;) Must be this coffee this morning.
Blood and lunacy wrapped up so beautifully, truly a poet you are. You have full license to develop a drinking problem and die impoverished. Please do create more of these lovely words in the meantime though. Continue to color this world of ours outside the lines.
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
Your review has left me with the warmth of a smile. Thank you, and welcome to the Cafe!
Great play on that wonderful word metaphor...and an appreciation that our lives goes into our writing, at the same time as absorb the world beyond us... Shakespeare aptly put ' in the same bracket 'the poet, the lunatic (moon influenced) and the lover.'
Oh yes, and less is more. Well done!
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
I gravitate to being a "lesser" poet. Love the Shakespearean quote - thank you, Jibey!
'It's raining cats and dogs,' "she has a heart of gold," Every day metaphors, used by non poets by the million, but as R E Ray says, only a poet can truly capture the magic held in a pen.
Beccy.
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
...and he is a very wise man, whom I admire. Always a pleasure having you on my pages, Beccy!
I love the way "metaphorically speaking" aptly refers to all of our hopeful aspirations of trying to be truly poetical . . . and at the same time, this phrase also refers to how a poet job is to speak metaphorically. Those kinds of carefully-crafted multiple-meaning phrases are like gold! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Thank you, Margie. Well said, as only you could speak it!
any comment at this point would only be an echo of what others have already rightfully said.... I haven't yet drank the moon, but I do a lot of waving and howling at it.... oh and Kelly, please be careful, those metaphors are very sharp... ;0)
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Wasn't it Christopher Cross who sang about the moon and New York City? I think you still have time .. read moreWasn't it Christopher Cross who sang about the moon and New York City? I think you still have time to drink it, Curt! Thanks so much!
And like you, I drink the moon, but the next day I don't feel so well. If you need anyone to metaphorically bandage you wounds, let me know; poets should do that for each other, there superstar!! Good work. I say work as in people who enjoy their work. Have a good one.
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
I will keep that in mind, thanks, Corey! Much appreciate your visit!