This is a great romantic poem well-crafted in the Casablanca tradition. I'm not even into romantic poems, but this one swept me up & carried me away, as if I were dancing in heels (never!) You use great details & the italicized quote is perfect -- kinda animalistic, kinda sexist & demanding, but back then, we girls thought brusque macho men were the cat's meow. I always wondered what my older sisters ever saw in John Wayne, for example. Anyhow, as you can see, your poem has immersed me! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
I've always loved how men wore those long overcoats and a fedora, but it would be hard to imagine Jo.. read moreI've always loved how men wore those long overcoats and a fedora, but it would be hard to imagine John Wayne that way. Lol, I just automatically think of him with a horse! ...thanks, Margie!
dear Kelly... "We'll always have Paris"... is the ultimate line...
until you wrote your poem, Kelly. Amazing attraction results in
sizzling lines. truly, Pat
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
...thank you, my fine feathered friend!
5 Years Ago
Kelly... we miss your poetry... you must have been sent to earth with a sense of beauty where flower.. read moreKelly... we miss your poetry... you must have been sent to earth with a sense of beauty where flowers and birds abide. dearly, Pat
I hope that next one is as good as this one. Liked the way the memories were sandwiched between the references to Casablanca. Also liked the sudden erotic buildup at the end of verse 3. Indeed, there was nothing better than Casablanca, especially the La Marseillaise scene.
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
It's truly a classic, and no matter how many times I've seen it, I always watch it again. Thanks so.. read moreIt's truly a classic, and no matter how many times I've seen it, I always watch it again. Thanks so much, John!
Bravo...this was exceptional. I love the theme and the depth that it pulls you into. In my head I heard movie reels. Love, the golden age of movies and that need. Perfect.
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Hey my friend, how's it going?
5 Years Ago
It going, taking things a day at a time. It’s been busy. Thanks for asking!
Casablanca, an all time classic. How I loved that film and still do. Black and white nostalgic Hollywood. You capture the urgency so well here of that burning passion when two fall head over heels.. I also like the detail of the imperfections which are endearing at the height of romance which later can become an irritant. Very nicely conveyed Kelly. Somehow I missed this one when you first posted. Pleased I found it now. Hope all is good with you.
Chris
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
I just love meeting people who are crazy about the old classics as I am. Nothing can warm up a chil.. read moreI just love meeting people who are crazy about the old classics as I am. Nothing can warm up a chilly day better. Ok, maybe a pot of chili, but nothing else. ; ) Thanks so much, Chris.
5 Years Ago
Those old films are like a comfort blanket Kelly. A quality that seems to be lost in current times:).. read moreThose old films are like a comfort blanket Kelly. A quality that seems to be lost in current times:)
5 Years Ago
I think the black and white productions in those days gave a greater sense of feel to the movie era... read moreI think the black and white productions in those days gave a greater sense of feel to the movie era. You stepped out in class, and you knew it!
No ooooo. It has to be black and white. Colour would wreck it. It would take the sharp focus away :).. read moreNo ooooo. It has to be black and white. Colour would wreck it. It would take the sharp focus away :)
Nothing like the old noir classics ..black n whites for the telling drama.. I like the way this is set up ..you capture the essence of a bygone era..nicely done.Kelly...
Ah, when cigarette smoke was allowed to get in our eyes. Can you imagine how s**t that movie would be with them vaping and drinking kale shakes. Kale? Try cardboard, it tastes better. And remember, if you see a vapist, it's okay to punch them. It's allowed. 😀
They don't make em like they used to.
Ps, sorry. Got caught in grumpy old git mode. 😀
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
I prefer my kale with mashed potatoes. I've been eating it all my life, but I've never tried it in a.. read moreI prefer my kale with mashed potatoes. I've been eating it all my life, but I've never tried it in a shake. Thank you for the read, Lorry!