Ode to Winter

Ode to Winter

 

 

winter calls

pillaging the ground

of fertile soil,

casting my breath

into thin air.

Reviews

[Relic]

A perfect example of show don't tell. Love it. (as I usually do).

[Kelly Scheppers]

You are here. My day is complete! Thank you, Tim!

[Relic]

........................ :)

[Lydia Shutter]

And I held my breath reading this....so beautiful....so gentle....so visual. Even though the air here is quite warm, I loved this one! Lydi**

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Lydi. That tree really got to me, it's so beautiful with the contrast of the white canvas. I've already printed it out and have it matted and framed!

[MCS]

Words and image are fantastic!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Mary. So glad to see you here. I'm telepathically sending you warm wishes for an early spring! ; )

[MCS]

Thank you my friend. We could all use some warmth tonight its bitterly cold out there.

[Papaya]

first off, wow, the picture is stunning
paired with the poem it creates such a lonely feeling within a sparse landscape
and I imagine that exhale of breath as being the only reminder of life in a cold scene

[Kelly Scheppers]

There's something about trees in snow, their stoic nature against a white canvas. It's a gorgeous shot...couldn't resist. Thanks so much, Ana. I'm sending you the warmest of wishes for an early spring! ; )

[Crowley]

Whenever I am on a road trip, and traveling through very sparse land, I always see a lone tree sitting a mile or so off the road and leading up to that tree is the only path for miles. This reminds me of that only lonelier and starker in its winter sleep. This was crisp and clean and captured the feel of the picture and of winter perfectly. My lungs burn a bit just thinking about it and my mind wanders to the thoughts I would have if I were standing there alone listening to the wind and getting none of the answers that I want. Powerful!

[Kelly Scheppers]

You did me proud, Crowley...thank you for such a profound review. It reads as poignant as the poem, itself!

[Richard🖌]

Just like that starkly stunning picture, Kelly,
Your words luringly grip our senses, strip them naked, and leave us gasping for the warmth of Spring's tender shoots of life's brilliant colors.
And, as usual, nothing equals the vivid imagery and enthralling creativity of your poetry; it's why I'm left breathless, always wanting more … of You! ⁓ Richard : )

[Kelly Scheppers]

There are graphics that simply speak to me in volumes. This one did it for me, and with a canvas of white to draw upon, it was hard to miss. Your presence here is much appreciated, Richard. Thank you so much!

[Fran Marie]

A love)y piece of brisk winter poetry
Your words elegant as the winter tree

Nice Work

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you most kindly, Fran! So good to have you here.

[Wesley Dingler]

The title of this caught me for sure, since my pseudonym has a verse with a similar title. But it was the image of the tree that kept me here. I love it.

[Kelly Scheppers]

This tree is well worth the stare. I find it quite soothing myself. Thank you, Wesley!

[Patricia Wedel]

Winter trees are bare except for evergreens...
we only warm up when logs are burning ... and lovers tease of Spring kisses when flowers bloom... Kelly your poetry inspires the poetry of Winter when even lovers hybernate. truly, Pat

[Kelly Scheppers]

The wind is whistling and the rain is falling...my kind of weather! Spring is but two months away? Soon, the robin will be seen, pulling worms from the ground, with the mourning dove's coo in the distance. Hold on to those warm thoughts, my friend! Thank you, Pat!

[barleygirl]

Spoken like a true californian! I tend to see winter in stark, brief terms too. It's all about how the ground and the air feel, subtleties that those from winter climes can barely detect. If I can just grit my teeth another few weeks, it'll be as good as springtime here! *smile* Always love to read you, so thanks for read requesting! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Kelly Scheppers]

I didn't recognize your avatar at first, then I realized, it's Margie, a most beautiful California girl! Always a pleasure to have your perspective on my page. You're always welcomed here! Thank you, Margie.