Three Days of Rain

 

 

 

 

Three days of rain

and the willow bends its branches low,

like the pendulum sway of a grandfather clock…

like the guileless accordion of fingertips

gliding gently across

a lover’s brow.

 

Reviews

[D. Mansfield]

Incredible, you say so much with so little, that is a rare talent

[Kelly Scheppers]

I appreciate that, Dave. Thank you so much!

[Digvijay Singh]

Are you a magician coz this is no less than a magic. Superb Kelly

[Kelly Scheppers]

What a lovely thing to say, Digvijay. Thank you!

[Chris Shaw]

Incredible imagery here Kelly. A superb piece of brevity. So poetic as well.

Chris

[Kelly Scheppers]

A look back from my humble beginnings. Thanks so much, Chris!

[Einstein Noodle]

your scene creation is top notch Kelly Legs Sheppers! we just had a bunch of rainy days ... now i want them back!!! ;)))))))) such a peaceful bliss ... in the romance of this poem .. that's what i feel ... well done says i! your heart's on your sleeve isn't it?!

[Kelly Scheppers]

This was from my first year here. I have long since loved the rain, and I try to write of it whenever I can. This one is quite dear to me - just like you!

[Einstein Noodle]

[SmittyJas]

A romantic tale of a three day rained out date in the sun romantic indoor fun.

[Kelly Scheppers]

My dear Smitty, thank you!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Is this the same willow that I found in a dream? Where lovers entangled in a sweet summer rain? The water cooling and the passion so fine.

Love,
Al

[Kelly Scheppers]

...how I wish I had one! Thank you, Al!

[Adam Adams]

So.. before I blow away.. just thought to take a little walk across the page full of rain. Rain's always been the foremost thing to beloved with. It's coldness has much to say.. to speak of its participation in guise of sweeten words (very tasteless but fruitful words). "Three Days Of Rain", is breathtakingly a very smashing title I've visualized in mind.. it's seemed alike a very unique preview of thrilling movie where the romance's well blended with its wings. Ah.. rain makes love more growing well, no matter with how much intensity. Emotions're always being found into its droplets... which brings some meatloaf of memories. Excellent work! Enjoyed reading your few captivating and alluring writes.. always a pleasure to read you, Kell!

Wish you happy-writing...
..will be hanging around your pages soon! ;)

[Kelly Scheppers]

I've always loved the rain, and I've made mention of it in many of my poems. I like your "meatloaf of memories"...very apropos for a rainy day! ...thank you, Adams!

[Tenten]

short sweet and amazing. its a piece of beauty that takes me away.

[Passion for Literature]

Aw Kelly this is so nice...the vision you evoke is one of comfort...melodious rhythm of the rain and the serenading tone of a grandfather clock is very soothing...the image you conjured of rainy days made the emotion a very gratifying experience...your words embody a tone of sensuality which makes this poem very delightful.

[Travis Lawrence]

Love it! I read it aloud, deep and slow, as that is how I imagine this should sound. My favorite line:

"like the guileless accordion of fingertips"

Have a nice day!