An Epitaph to Summer

An Epitaph to Summer

 

 

I am bidding farewell to summer.

Muted fragments of June and July
have all been tucked away

like Zuzu’s petals,
and August is tarrying long by the door
dragging its feet like a misbehaved child.

Farewell summer.

We’ll meet again in the serendipity of April,

on the back porch of May

when daffodils commence to bloom.

Where watercolor sunsets

will lead me to walk in skirted hems
the McCartney paths of yesterday.

 

 

 

photography by Mecuro B. Cotto

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ahhhhh farewell and adieu dear summer heat and sweat ;) time to dance with the leaves :))))))))) love reading your poem ... an experience of mixed emotions ... well chosen pic too! had to look up ZuZu ... one of the wonderful benefits of reading at the Cafe' is all the varied cultural experiences one gains ..without leaving the home ... a satisfying read that already is calling me to read it again

[Kelly Scheppers]

It's hard to believe the first day of autumn is upon us already. That apple cobbler sure did hit the spot! Many thanks, Gene! x

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha your delicious Legs! I just realized in the book "Hocus Pocus" by Kurt Vonnegut there is a character named "Zuzu" ..she is the wife of a college president having an affair with the protagonist in the story ..its about the 3rd time I have read this one over about 30 yrs. .. crazy story! ;) big happy autumn to you my friend .. and hugs! (((((((((((((K)))))))))))))))

[Norman 223]

I particularly enjoyed your positive and optimistic view of the passing of summer. Your words made feel as though it would return before it had been missed,rather than the usual concept of a long spell of gloom.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you most kindly, Norman!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kelly.... September song when flowers bow to approaching chill... scents of autumn
and warm cider. Your poetry leaves me breathless as a kitten’s purr. truly, Pat

[Kelly Scheppers]

My heart appreciates your every word. Thank you, Pat!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kelly... we have been spared the ravishesnofbFlorence, and so has my daughter Edie and her family who live south in Virginia Beach. They stayed two days and nights with us, until the hurrucane took a new direction. The residents of the Carolinas were and are being damaged and thousands without electricity. We are looking forward to
April and May and the beauty of restoration. Fondly, Pat

[Davidgeo]

That made me feel all warm inside. And then a little sad, but, also a little hopeful.

Well done. That was some good poetry... it paints a nice picture.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, D. Much appreciate the warmth of your words!

[Alexa Apothic Red]

Ohhh Kelly!! I love this sooo much!! August tarrying and dragging its feet like a misbehaving child? And the serendipity of April-gahhhh!!! My favorite line of all: the McCartney path of yesterday.... ohhhh how I love your reference to the greatest band ever! As per usual, a stroke of literary brilliance with your subtle nods to the classics I so adore!!

While summer’s passing is spun in a lovely tribute, the mood of the poem is still accepting and reflective of all that summer had to offer and hopeful about what’s to come. Were that not the case, August wouldn’t be a “misbehaving” child; instead he’d be a wild, free spirit, encouraged to roam freely and take up as much room and playtime as he wanted.. only when he was fully exhausted, by default would he willingly hand over the reins to September ;)

Bravo, PIC!!! X consider the fall leaves at your feet now but wayward roses of my admiration. X

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your presence is always one that makes me smile. I am so blessed to have you here! x ...thank you, girl!

[Alexa Apothic Red]

Aw, you’re welcome! Glad to be a part of your smile! Keep the emotions and writing going always!! X

[sette]

so awesome words... uniquely written with optimism and faith..

[Kelly Scheppers]

Two qualities I nurture everyday. Thank you, Sette!

[Neville]

Beautiful words indeed, tinged with both a knowing and familiar sadness, but with a sense of optimism too.. am so glad you added a little bit o the latter Kelly..... A golden good day to you.... Neville

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, dear headless one! ; )

[Neville]

she sounds like an angel but I can't see her.... my pleasure... I think........ Z

[Samuel Dickens]

So lovely and serene, this parting song to summer. Now for the chilly nights and colorful leaves.

[Kelly Scheppers]

That's the best thing about September, isn't it? How everything changes. Thank you, Sam!

[An owl on the moon]

This is so tenderly crafted with the warmest, sweetest winds. Beautifully touching ode, making me ache the passing of summer already. I grew up in the San Joaquin Valley in Central California where it could be 100 degrees for a month at a time, so I thrive in the fire. The whisper of Zuzu'a petals made me smile... such a joy in remembrances.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Autumn brings much melancholy to me, in having to let go of another summer. The passage of time is becoming more fleeting, it seems. Thank you, dear friend!

[Crowley]

Oh yes...that last line is fabby!!! And the feel of the whole thing is so spot on. Here autumn doesn't come until late October most years. The quality of light is right, the feeling of harvest is their but the heat is still in the 100's. Its hard to feel fall like when its like that. Plus the hot chics on the porch with autumn foliage in the background is always a nice touch...just sayin'. Great piece!

[Kelly Scheppers]

I knew the woman would snare some attention!! Lol, thanks so much, Crowley. I'm always turning my head sideways to see you! ; )