Lovely the Lily

...a haiku

Lovely the Lily

          

 

lovely the lily

with trumpet petals sounding

love’s orchestration.

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Im whirling and swishing in the beauty of this magical music. Thank you for igniting my springtime melody!

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm thrilled to see you, Eve. Hope you are feeling much better. Thank you, darlin! x

[Coyote Poetry]

Perfect use of words. A amazing poem Kelly. Artwork and words were outstanding.
Coyote

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, dear John. Happy spring!

[Coyote Poetry]

Almost in Michigan. Broke 50 degrees today and you are welcome Kelly.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Kelly... a darling Haiku as though the sound of
a trumpet could unfold on a Lilly so soft and elegant...
where petals play with the orchestrated violins
and percussion revelations of gilded memories...
truly, Pat

[Kelly Scheppers]

I really enjoy writing haiku's. Thank you for enjoying them just the same, Pat!

[Patricia Wedel]

Blossoms are falling... like soft snow on meadows sweet... embracing loves kiss...
Kelly ! You are welcome

[Gee]

My mum's favourite flower, my wife's too. Mine, well got to be cauliflower with cheese sauce, hmmmm, yummy.
Hi Kelly, hope you are well.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Lol, cute! Btw, how do you cook cauliflower? It's a veggie that I never quite understood. ...thanks for the best wishes, Gordon. My best to you as well!.

[Gee]

Good morning. Vsn be boiled, roasted or steamed, I prefer steamed then covered in cheese sauce and scoffed. Deeeeeeeeeeee lishus.

[Ghost]

Awww the symphony of flowers, so beautiful looking, so sweet to smell, and such life they bring to ones heart.. I love the the sight, and smell of flowers the joy they bring not only to me and to the one I share them with... Thanks for sharing Kelly...

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Earl. I love them, too!

[Roland Petrov]

What Stella said! I have written my fair share of haiku, but not many people write them as lovely as this one. But then again, you are the mistress of the interesting and impactful short poem.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Not only am I flattered, but I am deeply grateful for such a compliment. Thank you, Roland!

[Stella Armour]

A beautiful haiku, not many people write them as well as this one :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am delighted beyond words...thank you, Stella!

[Stella Armour]

well deserved :)

[emmajoy]

You seem to perfect every writing form there is!!! Wonderful meaning yet leaving one's imagination to elaborate or - just sighhhh over.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...aww, thank you, Em!

[Vivian Fisk]

This is THE finest haiku I've seen here. I'm not a fan of the art form because I always seem to see a lot of lazy efforts (or it could be that I just don't get them). But I get this one. I get the energy, the music, and the serenity. And I really really like it. Thank you.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I've only written a few, but I do enjoy their brevity, and I am most proud you did, too! What a lovely compliment - thank you!

[Alfred Kukitz]

i keep wondering where is the dna gene that makes beauty, in you, in lilly’s, in all the life that blesses our eyes.

virtuoso my dear lady!

regards,
al

[Kelly Scheppers]

...perhaps it is within the eye of the beholder! What a guy! ; ) x