Lovely the Lily

...a haiku

Lovely the Lily

          

 

lovely the lily

with trumpet petals sounding

love’s orchestration.

Reviews

[Crowley]

Color, romance and music jammed into three short lines. that watercolor is fabulous.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Haiku's are such fun to write. Outside of free verse, they are my second love! Thanks so much, Crowley!

[Lydia Shutter]

A beautiful Haiku, Kelly. "Love's orchestration".....no sweeter melody, is there? Lydi**

[Kelly Scheppers]

I came to the attention of not receiving notification of your review, and Traci's below, by reading Crowley's. Please accept my apologies!

[Lydia Shutter]

No apology necessary, Kelly....you know I love to read your words. Thank yous are not what I look for.

[Traci]

You are so good at this form, simply beautiful art and words, Kel.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I was not made aware of your review, or Lydi's, by the system. Please accept my apologies for this being so late!

[Traci]

No apology necessary. Love your words and will always be here to read them.

[J]

Oh perfect complexity, Kel. I could never master haiku -- too mouthy I am. Love the innuendo in such simplicity. Well done, my friend. x

[Kelly Scheppers]

Hey everybody - look who's in da house!! ; ))) Thank you, girl! x

[Ted Kniffen]

So many different varieties and colours to add a dash of delight to our lives.
They truly trumpet love's orchestration...unlike their cousin the onion...oh well, I like onions too.

Good write, Kelly.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Lol, I didn't know they were related! Thanks, Ted!

[lightsong]

in fact... the lovely are Your words, splendidly charming!

[Kelly Scheppers]

So kind...thank you!

[Alexa Apothic Red]

I envisioned both flower and feminine form in this piece.. it is musical to the ears as well as sensual to the feel.. writers since the beginning of time have poeticized flowers alongside the female form.. and "love's orchestration" in the form of the lily embodies the idea of beauty that inspires love to happen. simple and well-written... love

[Kelly Scheppers]

So true, Alexa. I read about the analogy of the two a few years ago. It's complimentary and provocative in a most sensual way. Many thanks!

[Alexa Apothic Red]

...oh yes!

[marilyn 1225]

simple and stunning great work

[Kelly Scheppers]

I love this form. It's the only one I dare to write, other than free verse. Thank you, Marilyn!

[marilyn 1225]

well you are so good at writing this form.. and nice to see a beautiful picture to illustrate your work.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Haiku's are so fun to create. They are always graceful and harmonious and your Lovely Lilly is all of that.

[Kelly Scheppers]

It's the only other form I dabble in from time to time. Thank you, Cherrie!

[Einstein Noodle]

ohhhhhhhhhhh lovely indeed ... perfect pic to accompany ..i hear the music dear friend! thank you for sharing these inspirations of nature this morning ... a blessing to read ma'am!
E.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...and thank you, Gene. I can't say how happy I am to see you!

[Einstein Noodle]