Nicely captured Kelly. They do say each of us has a book in them, which I doubt is correct, as I know some who would struggle to have a piece of advice in them...And most probably I would/'t have much more than a pamphlet.
But as your analogy points out, perhaps we are our own book, awaiting the ink.
Beautifully expressed.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
I've been writing for twenty plus years. My pages will be yellow soon...but still I write. Many tha.. read moreI've been writing for twenty plus years. My pages will be yellow soon...but still I write. Many thanks and best of wishes to you, Lorry!
6 Years Ago
Those years have a habit of creeping up on us. I didnt start writing until I was 26, almost a life a.. read moreThose years have a habit of creeping up on us. I didnt start writing until I was 26, almost a life ago.
I love the way your poem starts out with the mechanics of a literal comparison, but then gradually drifts further & further into areas of more depth & character. In this way, it gives the sensation of building to a crescendo, a brilliant way to show this aspect, as well as mentioning it in your message! *smile* Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
I think you just read between the lines, Margie! Thank you, kindly!
and at the library we can check out a version of our lives for free.
this is so well done...love the metaphor and you present it with perfect symmetry.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Not too many bells and whistles, but it gave me a thrill upon completion. It's always a pleasure se.. read moreNot too many bells and whistles, but it gave me a thrill upon completion. It's always a pleasure seeing you, J. Even though you are a tree now! ; )
A very well thought out analogy Kelly. I agree so much on the price. We are offered so much for so little. Thank you for this gem.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
An ending we both agree upon, and that is that we are offered so much for so little. You are the ge.. read moreAn ending we both agree upon, and that is that we are offered so much for so little. You are the gem, my friend. Thank you!
some are open, some closed, and some in between but we all have a story. can be exciting or scary to start a new chapter. like the part about the spine and the voice. powerful and effective analogy ...
...now that's the stamp of approval I was looking for! Thanks, patriot! ; )
6 Years Ago
now you've really got me thinking about this ... can be mystery, horror, romance, etc. so many poss.. read morenow you've really got me thinking about this ... can be mystery, horror, romance, etc. so many possibilities to fill up the pages in those books ...
You touched on it with this poem, each and everyone of us are a book... some of my chapters need to be rewritten I feel, but I know someone is reading me and saying his ending will be better.. Thank you for sharing Kelly...
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
I'm sure we all have chapters like that, Earl. You have plenty of time to turn them into masterpiec.. read moreI'm sure we all have chapters like that, Earl. You have plenty of time to turn them into masterpieces!
I agree Kelly. We are a book. To know someone properly. They must allow us to read their private chapters and truly understand them. I loved how you made the words understandable and worthwhile. Many kind of books. Each of us have been taught different lessons. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thank you, John. I know there's more I could have elaborated on, but you know me, I wanted to keep .. read moreThank you, John. I know there's more I could have elaborated on, but you know me, I wanted to keep it brief. : )
6 Years Ago
You did well Kelly. A wonderful poem and you are welcome.