Desire can be like a river that continuously flows in one path. To traverse it can take what seems like forever. You reflect what a lot of women are thinking I'll bet.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
I guess it is more of a woman's point of view since I wrote it. But I think a man could also identi.. read moreI guess it is more of a woman's point of view since I wrote it. But I think a man could also identify with it. Thank you, Tim!
Goodness, Kelly Dear,
I wondered what moonlight and love would look like blended together in a master poetess' ink … now, I know, and how enthralling it is to the senses.
I think if I were to close my eyes and dream of a Free Verse poem that expresses my heart and soul perfectly, I envision it to be exactly like this.
The picture … mm*
So tender and sweet, so marvelously rendered, Kelly, I think my heart just melted ✨⁓ Richard
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
There you go making me blush again! How sweet! Thank you my friend! x
Wonderful and true love Kelly.
"to bathe me in moonlight
with kisses that trace
the nape of
my neck,
the curvature of
my spine"
Love is simple. Soft touch and simple kiss. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Now that is how you pen desire... This piece makes you want to shelter it in the warmest regions of the heart. Great write!
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
I wrote this in a matter of minutes, wanting it to be something that would speak for both genders. .. read moreI wrote this in a matter of minutes, wanting it to be something that would speak for both genders. I am thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you, Travis!
6 Years Ago
In minutes? Whew, that means it is truly sincere. Well done.
Such a heartfelt write... i love your writing Kelly and I have read your work here and on the other site and sometime I feel like you bring my writing to the surface so thank you for that... Now if you find this love please, please hang onto it (I wish I had)... The Becky from my work is still my friend and my muse and I believe she is ok with that... I know it still makes her smile, and blush, and cry... So again love like there is no tomorrow..
Perhaps conceited to say but in these beautiful words I can see my dearly beloved and myself. Hi Kelly hope all is well with you and the world
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Now that's a compliment I am most proud to receive. Thank you, Gordon. Best wishes to you and the M.. read moreNow that's a compliment I am most proud to receive. Thank you, Gordon. Best wishes to you and the Mrs.!
This is beautifully balancing on the edge of quietly desperate longing & sweetly compelling seduction. One of the most down-to-earth sexy poems I've ever read, which is a quality I always long for. Nicely on the cusp of being lyrical & straightforward! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Many hugs and thanks to you, Margie - my fellow moon maiden!
um, Wow. deep couldn't even begin to express the depth of this. a provocatively powerful penning interwoven and laced with libido. transcending and standing the test of time. doesn't get much better than this.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
The weight of your words is most appreciated, Pete. Thank you!