Redefining Nature

Redefining Nature

 

 

One by one

they fall

with diaphanous clarity,

leaving no footprints

as they go

 

redefining nature

as we know.

 

Reviews

[Pete]

with no two alike, it's all new as you tell. always impressed with how much can be said with a few well chosen words. learned a new word too. picture is "purr"fect as are the words. snowing outside my window now as i read. the lightness and purity of this takes me back to childhood. so cute, innocent and lovely!

[Kelly Scheppers]

...thank you, Pete! May you have a wonderful Christmas and bright new year!

[Einstein Noodle]

i have a pristine picture in my memmind ..i was around 11 maybe ..we lived in upstate NY where snow falls in layers of 3 feet ... but those big ol' flakes are so fluffy and they don't fall..they float ..i was standing under the street light on our corner at night ..all by myself in that wonderland of cold night faerry dust ...mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm such a dream ..nice one Legs!
E.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Those are the kind of memories that'll keep you young, my friend! Many blessings to you, this Christmas season! xo

[Einstein Noodle]

God bless you too dear friend

[Lydia Shutter]

"redefining nature"....seems we see it changing before our eyes at times....if we choose to see it. Beautifully written. Your words are always well chosen and filled with imagery. Lydi**

[Kelly Scheppers]

Winter rarely shows itself here, but last night we had temps in the upper 30's. I could actually "see" my breath! Thank you, Lydi!

[Ted Kniffen]

Lovely theme to go with a great picture... What does the cat see?... Snowflakes, angels or masters?
Good write, Kelly.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you so much, Ted! Merry Christmas!

[emmajoy]

With your ever gift of language, Kelly, dear Kelly... you make Heaven and clarity a beautiful couple. xx

Wishing you everything you wish for yourself and your darlings now and way into the future.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Hey darlin, thank you so much! I wish all the same and more for you this holiday season. ...and much love!

[emmajoy]

Waving across the mails... THANK YOUUUU x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

or do we redefine human nature...

damn good poem...i just keep coming back and finding new themes...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i feel allegory here...the cat in the window pads silently leaving no footprints...and we as humans...we rise we fall and we wonder, (especially those of us who write poetry)

if our words will redefine emotions---and whether we will leave any prints...

j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Let's hope we do! Many thanks, Jacob!

[...Relic...]

Who else could write something so simple yet so musical. Excellent poem with an excellent picture. :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

The photo really did it for me, too. Your words provide all the warmth I need. Thanks, Tim. And have a wonderful holiday!

[...Relic...]

You're welcome, and you have a great holiday too. :)