So Deep It Goes

So deep it goes

 

 

 

Love walks into our lives

masquerading a false bravado,

beseeching us to fall.

 

It withers

when unattended to,

it scars

leaving an indelible impression

like footprints in the snow...

 

so deep it goes.

 

 

Reviews

[Done]

A job well done. Love is one of those eternal themes that so many have tried to explain but can we truly? Its like describing a color to a blind person. You have to experience it yourself along with the hurt and pain that is sometimes in its wake. And yet in a short precise poem you have spoke volumes. I love the word imagery here. Bravo. I love this.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you. My writing is everything to me, as are comments such as this!

[Done]

May your muse always whisper inspiration into your ears and may your arrows always always hit their mark.

[DianneR]

"...masquerading a false bravado, beseeching us to fall..." Wow. You've managed to expose love to its' very core. Lovely piece, Kelly.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you so much for the warmth of your words, Dianne!

[conversations with her ..]

This is pure gold.

I'm a fan of the art of love when writing

well done love

[Cassie]

I relate too badly, just today i was telling my collegues how much I would want to feel that kind of love, that crazy young love when all that matters is just the two of you. love walks into our lives so freely and sometimes casually, then it leaves sometimes even without a warning leaving its host with a lot of baggage to get rid off.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kelly... like sunsets we can glow and deeply set below the horizon... leaving colors that soothe the soul of others we have known.
We are the brush that sweeps away the heartache that others share. Truly, Pat

[Ruth]

It does indeed, it saturates the soul and life becomes unknown for a while when love dares to enter...as always dear Kelly, you write with such beauty and flow xo

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am elated in seeing you. Thank you, Poppy!

[andrew mitchell]

Yes Kelly the greater the love the greater the scar from its impression it leaves. splendid writing as always Kelly

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you dear Andrew!

[Gee]

Hopefully, fingers crossed, I will never have to bear these scars, although I know many that do.
Beautifully written Kelly. Hope you are well.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Gordon. I appreciate the good thought!

[Anand Sehgal]

So much has been spoken using so few words :) I was your fan and I remain so :) how have you been? :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Still writing, and very glad to see you! I appreciate the warmth of your words..thank you so much, Anand!

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed, the impression is so deep that it can never be totally filled in....it remains. If the love stays, that is good. If it has left, well, it leaves that hole....forever. Beautifully written, Kelly. Lydi**

[Kelly Scheppers]

You are always a welcomed sight, no matter what I am going through, Lydi. Thanks so much!

[Lydia Shutter]

I hope all is well, my friend. You know you can always email me if you need me.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...thank you, Lydi!

[Lydia Shutter]

We've been friends a long time, Kelly....always here for you.