As I Metaphorically Breath You In

 

I feel I could write forever

my pulse consisting

of syllables

and nouns,

your name being

the cardiac massage

upon my chest,

as I metaphorically

breathe you in.

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

haha I always laugh on how you pull these gems off with such simplicity and finesse Kelly, and I wondered if you were breathing in a good brew of coffee.

[Kelly Scheppers]

For the most part, it all pops into my head. Thank you so much for the compliment, Andrew!

[andrew mitchell]

so so effortless.....

[Rubein Geterminah]

The source of inspiration seen in that moment of composition, forever.
But the truth is, a time comes that you inspiration seems cloudy and the muses depart company. That's the time of inspirational invalidness.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you for your insight!

[Rubein Geterminah]

Welcome dear

[Alfred Kukitz]

The sweet smell of forever tapping away the words, phrases and ideas in the land of eternity. It's your heaven Kelly and you deserve every inch of it!

regards,
al

[Kelly Scheppers]

My dear friend, please consider yourself hugged! x

[Paul Bell]

Nine lines of sensuality.
Does it get any better than that.
Love the word flow.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you for the smile I'm smiling - from ear to ear!

[Paul Bell]

Must be Saturday night syndrome. lol

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, Yes, Yes!!!! So sensual, so seductive....love can be inspiring. Kelly, this one is great. Lydi**

[Kelly Scheppers]

...thank you. Glad to see you home safely!

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

To be so connected...to be one breath away...i miss moments of unity. You have me calling out...to the wind....my love, come back to me .........again.......sigh...

[Kelly Scheppers]

I've missed you - and I thank you!

[emmajoy]

Sumptuous,, sensual, beautiful.. a luxury of words, Kelly, and more than memorable. Clever, wonderful you!

[Kelly Scheppers]

My dear Emma, you are a joy to me...thank you!

[Patricia Wedel]

Kelly... "Life is not measured by breathless
moments; but by moments that take your
breath away". This quote is how I feel
about your poetry. truly, Pat

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your heart overwhelms me, Pat...thank you!

[Enchanted-Raven]

Gorgeous read...enjoyed :) x

[Kelly Scheppers]

Good to see you, Tina! Thank you so much!

[Enchanted-Raven]

Thank you dear, you too :) x

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This was an engaging read from the title till the end. I loved your use of metaphors especially "your name being the cardiac massage upon my chest" that was a great one :)
The pic suits the words really well.

[Kelly Scheppers]

A compliment worth a thousand words - thank you!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Kelly. Always a pleasure reading your works 😊