Ummm … Kelly,
I love your gently flowing Free Style, how you blend emotion, gentleness, beauty, vivid feeling, and thought together with tender sorrow, threading it through the yearning essence of your living, breathing words, and the picture reeks of perfect ache.
Yes, I "remember that feeling", Kelly … every moment!
That is a really good writing. I felt that way for awhile.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Its a wonderful feeling when the reader expresses the same joy the writer had in writing. Thank you.. read moreIts a wonderful feeling when the reader expresses the same joy the writer had in writing. Thank you, Vivian!
Love comes in many guises. Sometimes it's there and we don't recognize it and we let it slip through our fingers like so much sand. When it comes and it will come even if for only a while it is a whole new world. A world with stars sparkling in your eyes. a world where only the two of you exist. Love finds us all, we must bide its arrival and when it comes welcome it with arms outspread.
many of told me because I am an older gentleman, I could never write with feeling...sometimes I agree but let me tell you this, I can read with emotion and I felt every word you wrote....you are a true writer
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
So kind of you to say. Thank you for that, Herman. A true gentleman you are!
7 Years Ago
I accept your compliment with a grateful heart....
I think your poem too is lovingly penned! As Poppy says in her review ... it is very potent....... you portray the wonder and loveliness of Nature so well in this beautifully tactile poem. ( and, although you will probably deny it, I bet you have known love !!!!!!)
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Oh yes, I have indeed! This was written many years ago. I simply revised it and brought it to life.. read moreOh yes, I have indeed! This was written many years ago. I simply revised it and brought it to life! Thank you!