A shade of gray

The shattered glass

upon the floor

gave credence

to her doubts once more

 

for there,

within the matted frame

a love had vowed

to never wane.

A promise

that beckoned to be true,

was dressed in something old

and new…

 

and wearing a smile

handsomely portrayed,

deception wore

a shade of gray.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when the glass is shattered...that rose colored glass...deception shades every emotion with a grey cloud...

j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I believe angst runs a very close second. Thank you, Jacob! Hope the new year is treating you kind!

[aLittlePain]

Beautifully expressed and so close to home. The form is so strong babe, exquisite piece. R xo

[Kelly Scheppers]

I don't usually do rhyme, but this time, I think it really worked to my advantage. Thank you for your kindness, Rach! x

[B]

I love how your words some how flow off the page
Very much mimics the idea of deception
Starts off strong and wanes off

Then you wonder
What was all that

Really well done !!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you for your review. Its always a pleasure hearing from a new reader!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Portrays the feelings of betrayal by a spouse who took marriage vows and then broke them. The metaphorical picture frame laying shattered is often reality. Very poignant Kelly.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Sometimes these pieces of reality take on a pulse all their own. Thank you for your perspective, John!

[Lyn Anderson]

I love the font and form of this piece, which lends itself beautifully to the heartbreak. Each time an author takes back this shade I feel relief. As to the content, deception in love is the ultimate pain. Nicely expressed.

[Kelly Scheppers]

There was another font I wanted to use, but the Cafe didn't accept it for some reason. I like changing them up to suit the content. Thank you so much, Kara!

[Einstein Noodle]

mmm a keeper Kelly! smooth as a comb through angel hair ...each line adds to the betrayal and heart break .. strong form, rhythm and rhyme .. now i'm sad Kelly ..your poem moved me big big!
E.

[Kelly Scheppers]

We all wish to move our reader. Thank you for giving me that!

[Einstein Noodle]

yep! :) ................

[Dara]

Very strong, emotional imagery here, Kelly. Her broken heart is so evident and your choice of words and the flow of this write are so powerful. So very well done!

[Kelly Scheppers]

It's true what they say - about some pieces writing themselves. Thank you so much, Dara!

[Alfred Kukitz]

An abundance of sheer poetic vision and wisdom. I can find a hundred million ways to compliment your talent and never repeat myself once.

Love,
Al

[Kelly Scheppers]

...that's why I adore you so! x

[Tony Jordan]

Strong feelings conveyed in such subtle poetry. The imagery is compellingly sad. Excellent!
:)

[Kelly Scheppers]

I wanted to convey a strong feeling of betrayal, mixed with angst. So glad it came across. Ty, Tony!

[Tony Jordan]

Fait accompli Kelly.

[andrew mitchell]

A very polished presentation, the emotional symmetry flowed in this sad write Kelly. Beautifully said.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you for the warmth of your sincerity, Andrew. It is much appreciated.

[andrew mitchell]

you are always welcome Kelly on your fine writes! You teach an art in reading your works!