Drunk on Love

Drunk on love

 

 

 

There is nothing

I require of you,

other than

the look in your eyes

 

no clarity

or cut of diamonds

could take my breath away

like the feeling of you

so close…

 

to lie in the confines

of an unmade bed with you,

weekends long

 

quoting Shakespeare,

getting drunk

 

on love.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Inebriation, your eyes, ruffled sheets, the bard all in the first morning of love.

Purrrrrr!

Al

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you for the warmth you give, my friend! x

[Cassie]

I missed this...this is a good valentines special. love it

[Kelly Scheppers]

...such a lovely thought, thank you, Cassie!

[Ruth]

Now that would be the ultimate :) Love should be this way, love is an art like most things, so beautiful Kelly :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

It's an art that doesn't require us to stay inside the lines! ...always my best, Poppy!

[Pete]

definitely a "Do not disturb" sign on this doorknob. excellent. whole thing flows like sweet honey - literary nectar.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...now, that's nice!! Ty, Pete!

[Pete]

very welcome. i like your style.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I love the way you make me remember, my need is to be that kinda woman. No manufactured restraints, no business jargon, baby throw up, just pure femininity. Your poetry is seduction, YOU ARE A Goddess!

[Tony Jordan]

Did you just say 'baby throw up' - sh*t Queenie !! You are kicking my a*s at reviewing now !!
(Give me a break pleeeeeease)
;D

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

You are a wonderful reviewer, I have no idea what your talking about. I review very Lil. I'm really not even helpful and I bite at editing...especially mine own. "OUR KELLY", just inspires me to remember who I can be 😃!

[Tony Jordan]

Just joshing with ya.
She is super-inspirational, I totally agree. :))

[Kelly Scheppers]

...am I allowed to blush? Thank you, my dear Eve...and Tony!

[Tony Jordan]

Shakespeare is such an aphrodisiac.
Sentiments like a lover's presence being more precious than precious stones flies in the face of the bling generation.
They need to take a leaf from your book of love Kelly.
Loved this.
:)

[Kelly Scheppers]

...thank you...your words warm my heart overwhelmingly!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Sounds sooooo divine and said in such a seductive voice Kelly!

[Kelly Scheppers]

I was reeling after listening to Alan Rickman reciting sonnet #130. Thank you so much, John!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

He has a seductive voice indeed Kelly!

[Einstein Noodle]

reads like a love letter ...makes me want to be a part .. so ..nice one Kelly ..dreamy, romantic blissful sharing ...the idea of being so comfortable all weekend is heaven on Earth ;)
E.

[Kelly Scheppers]

A most lovely interpretation...thank you, dear Gene!

[Ted Kniffen]

An unmade bed. Another's heart. Shakespeare. To love or not to love, that's not even a question. Good one, Kelly.

[Kelly Scheppers]

An unmade bed is an open invitation for my muse. It tends to wander through many scenarios. I'm glad you enjoyed this one, Ted...thank you!

[Gee]

I was with you until Shakespeare made an appearance, can't make head nor tail of his writing.
Haven't had a day like the one described for years...will have to make time eh.
Beautifully written Kelly

[Kelly Scheppers]

You know, I had Keats there, than decided to go with Shakespeare. But it can be whomever you wish it to be, my friend. Yes, making the time is most important! Thank you, Gordon!