A book in braille

A book in braille

 

 

your eyes

are the precipice

of night

 

my virgin light

 

they lead me through

a labyrinth of love

 

with hands

traversing me

 

like the pages of

 

a book

in braille.

 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Exquisite way to flesh out an analogy that's perfect for this scene. The way fingers move over braille buttons is often so thoughtful & sensuous, a visual brought to life in your poem! Happy New Year! Fondly, Margie

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, dear Margie! Happy New Year!!

[Ghost]

A good love is when a man can read his partner with his fingertips with his hands, exploring her ever curve with tenderness.. If he can read his woman like that he doesn't need eyes to see her beauty when he read it with his eyes closed... Beautiful write thank you for sharing Kelly.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I fell in love with the tenderness of this, hoping it would be widely received. Great insight, Earl!

[alan peter kelly]

the precipice

of night.

I read it

with my

eyes

closed.

[Kelly Scheppers]

How wonderful to see you here again, Alan! I am thrilled beyond words - thank you!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Short and full of piquant descriptive flavours and sensation. Was he called Hans?

[Kelly Scheppers]

Hmm, that conjures up the memory of Alan Rickman for me! I wish!!

[redzone]

sensuous reality when fingers read the desires spoken in the voice of our bodies.... I always loved reading the goosebumps I could raise on my love and often were just as lovely as her sighs...

a poem of romantic "touch" Ke;;y.. thanks for sharing...

redzone

[Kelly Scheppers]

You are most kind to say so, Curt...thank you!

[Lyn Anderson]

ah and how sensitive those fingertips must be.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...just like reading an atlas! Thank you, Kara!

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Ooooo sensuality in a short poem. Wonderful images.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...thank you kindly!

[Ruth]

This is as sensual as it gets! Stunning visuals and softness here hon, just mind altering in the most beautiful way...

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Poppy. You always make me feel special! x

[m.s.early]

Sensual... beautiful... concise... exquisite

[Kelly Scheppers]

You are most kind...and I thank you!

[Alfred Kukitz]

"Masterpiece".......................

Love,
Al

[Kelly Scheppers]

...and a smile that warms my heart! xo