To pen this ache that bleeds me

...a birthday tribute to Keats

To pen this ache that bleeds me

No compass

will map

my journey,

the valleys my mind

have traversed

in sleep…

to pen this ache

that bleeds me,

mortally wounded.

 

 

 

 

A birthday tribute to John Keats /

photo courtesy of “Bright Star”

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

"Bright Star" is an extraordinary film based on the true story of undying love between poet, John Keats, [Ben Whishaw] and his spirited muse, Fanny Brawne, [Abbie Cornish]. It takes place in 19th century England, and its seductive pleasures will illuminate your heart!

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

Hither, hither, hither
Love its boon has sent—
If I die and wither
I shall die content!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thanks, Ken! Cool avatar...beautiful horse!

[Richard🖌]

"Happy birthday, John!
Both a sad and beautiful story, Kelly, you've epitomized the nuances of it to perfection … and, nothing you do surprises me anymore, but I'm still as impressively enthralled, as ever! ; )
Make it
"the valleys my mind
'have' traversed", M'Darlin'.

New Year Hugs to ya, Kelly ⁓ Richard

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Richard! I'm surprised I didn't catch that. Gee, whatever would I do without you? ; )

[Richard🖌]

I dunno, Kelly! 8-)

[Cassie]

Kelly you are an amazing poet. I love love reading you.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your review warms my heart, Cassie. Thank you!

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I could lay with you for hours in the fields...starring at the clouded sky ...comparing animal shapes and giggling of memories...picking flowers and making crowns.....

[Kelly Scheppers]

...you've made me think of my older sister, who I lost many years ago. Thank you, Eve!

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Then we have something else in common:)

[Lorry]

Deliciously worded Kelly, what more can I say? :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

...nothing more is required...it went straight to my heart, thank you!

[Lorry]

You're welcome Kelly.

[Lydia Shutter]

I had not heard of this movie, but now I want to see it, Kelly! No compass can map the journey of love....it has a mind of its own. Your love of Keats has inspired so many wonderful writes. This is one of them. Lovely. Lydi**

[Kelly Scheppers]

A thousand thank you's, Lydi! I get so excited in telling people about this movie...it will definitely touch the heart and soul of you!

[Lisa Lindsey]

This makes me want to see the film "Bright Star" right now! I am a fan of the whole period almost as much as I am a fan of your poetry, Kelly. Keats would be proud!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Lisa, I can't tell you how much this film has influenced my writing! The ending is riveting - you'll find yourself wanting to watch it over and over again! Thank you, my dearest friend!

[Bare Trees]

I suppose Keats could be considered a Mozart of poetry. The picture is breathtaking to me being I find women of that era and place quite sexy. I've never known you to write a bad poem. I'm sure Keats would be impressed. I know I am.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am flattered you remember me after all these years. It is a pleasure to have you review my work again...thank you so much!

[Papaya]

I really want to see this film, such great reviews. The poem is super, Kelly. It awakes an ache...

[Kelly Scheppers]

...it's a heartache, Ana...but so worth it! Let me know when you do...many thanks! x

[Alfred Kukitz]

You keep eclipsing your own great talent. May I kneel before you in a tear of understanding.


Love,

Al

[Kelly Scheppers]

You flatter me so, my kindest of friends...thank you! x

[Alfred Kukitz]

It's because I love you dearly, to hell with distances, your purity shines to my east coast.