such a smooth romantic poem Kelly, I especially loved that line: "the hand to the small of my back"... I guess because I have always thought it was the small things, a touch, a special look or smile, the sparkle in the eyes, listening to the words she/he say, that shows how much you love someone... and never letting them hit the ground when they fall... and as you also say, making them feel young, alive.. for you a Superman, for me a Wonder Woman... nicely expressed Kelly..
redzone
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
I believe everyone fell in love with that line. Thank you for reading this one, Curt!
True love smiles through a touch on the back. It goes both ways. The feel of the back beneath a palm can elicit those same feelings. Good write, Kelly. Simple but true.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
There's a rush to it that I find hard to explain. It's good to know it goes both ways...thanks, Ted.. read moreThere's a rush to it that I find hard to explain. It's good to know it goes both ways...thanks, Ted!
Ah, the man who can be all that is the one that deserves a life with you! To see yourself through another's eyes and to know he sees only youth and beauty....that is real love! So sweet a love poem, Kelly. Lydi**
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
I'm such a sucker for a love poem, what can I say? Thank you so much, Lydi!
Your words float off the page and create such an affectionate, loving mood. Seems to me you have met your soulmate here and what a beautiful thing it is.
Rocky Mountain high ... pie in the sky...
fascinating touch of being satisfied... truly, Pat
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you, Pat. Hope you're having a lovely autumn!
8 Years Ago
Hi Kelly, leaves are blushing with colors of pink and orange...
birds are chirping summer su.. read moreHi Kelly, leaves are blushing with colors of pink and orange...
birds are chirping summer sunset songs... Seasons blend with
the earth... truly, Pat