My Paris

My Paris

 

 

My Paris

cohesively exists

of just we two…

with a destination to anywhere

and a bank account in excess

of love.

 

 

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

it's definitely quite "memorable" that's being written with a great compilation of savored memories. you remember emptiness, collect all of those crystals of love-edge in the bowl of your very hands, & nicely garnish 'em incessantly by means of.. the trails of your deepen thoughts.. well poured down in words now.

lovely. excellent work as always!

[William Liston]

I enjoyed the way you conveyed love in this. Sometimes, when we're with that 'special someone,' it feels like their touch is all we need -- with that alone, everything seems perfect. The 'Paris' analogy was used very uniquely in this; usually, when someone thinks of Paris, the 'fancy' things in life (large buildings, fancy resturants, etc ... ) come to mind, but in this poem, you conveyed the simpler side of being with a lover quite well. This was short and sweet. I enjoyed.

- William Liston

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, William!

[Sarah]

Shows what love is all about. You don't need fancy materialistic things and expensive destinations. Just each other. And a bottle of wine doesn't hurt ;)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Ah Sarah, I LOVE the way you think! Pass the bottle of Zinfandel, please! ; ) ...thank you!

[Antoñyo]

They still grow women like that?

[Sarah]

Yes sir. Just gotta find the right one.

[Antoñyo]

teasin', but yeah, the right 1..just 1 shouldn't be so hard.

[Lisa Lindsey]

"We will always have Paris" - won't we? Beautiful and brief.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am now a happiER woman!! Attention fellow CafeERS...this gal will knock your socks off! Yeah, you're REALLY here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Antoñyo]

An elegantly written dream with wings to take the willing... in jeans, no less!

Thanks for the share

[Kelly Scheppers]

...in jeans, always! Thank you so much!

[Antoñyo]

You're welcome.

[Ms. Twitch]

I love this piece, absolutely beautiful. I can't wait for when I have the talent as you to write such short pieces and still touch a small part. Sending positive vibes to you and your writings. Cheers!

[Kelly Scheppers]

I deeply appreciate the compliment...thank you! And keep writing. I've been at it for 20 years now, and I'm still discovering new avenues! I love it, and I wish you the very best!

[Cassie]

awww....excess love, i like...this is a good sweet little poem

[Kelly Scheppers]

...thank you for such kindness, Cassie!

[stargirl23]

Loved this, challenging the idea that you need Paris and money when you can have love.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Oh yes, it is a many splendid thing! Thank you!

[andrew mitchell]

Well!! Paris Is the language of Love!! Say no more!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Merci Monsieur! ; )

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kelly, hauntingly spoken on the winds of
imagination... the world is your oyster... truly, Pat

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Pat...hope your birthday is a happy one!

[Patricia Wedel]

Thanks Kelly, always miss your poetry... and
so happy when I discover a new poem of yours.
My daughter Edie gave me two dozen yellow roses
for my birthday. They resemble small yellow peonies
with long stems. love, Pat