' Asleep in my bed, -- you’ll never know the love -- and feeling I have for you '
A gentleness of a poem, romantic and more. We should all feel this way, all wake this way. You lay words so beautifully in both literary and illustrative form. Sighhing, Kelly - thank you.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
...thank you, Emma. Your kindness is much appreciated!
The feeling you describe is such a unique, desirable feeling that I have felt before and when I read your words I knew exactly what you mean. It's a love, pure and unbroken and unlike any other feeling with any other person. I loved it :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
...you nailed it, Aaron...thank you, my friend! ; )
This is beautiful!! I love the ellipses used between "I'll tell you" and "in the morning". It playfully teases the reader :D
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I wanted that line to read like a hallelujah moment...for she was able to find a love that would sta.. read moreI wanted that line to read like a hallelujah moment...for she was able to find a love that would stay. Thank you, Kelsey. I appreciated your eye!
The feeling of love in this piece fairly explodes off of the page. The atmosphere of tranquility graces the writing, taking the reader in toward the peace. A simple testament of love made grand by your luscious presentation of the mood. Very nice, Kelly. take care...dan
So beautiful and softly romantic. Such loving thoughts making their way towards the morning's light are to be cherished and savored. Another exquisite write Kelly!
Beautiful. It's written and creates an elegantly sexy vibe. Very nice.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Francis...I like the avatar!
9 Years Ago
Thanks, I think it's fitting. It encompasses my secret writing side, very few people know about lol... read moreThanks, I think it's fitting. It encompasses my secret writing side, very few people know about lol.