Beautiful, gentle and kind words for love. I like the nightly embrace and the secret whispered shared. Nice flow of thoughts led to perfect ending. Thank you Kelly for sharing the outstanding poetry.
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Powerful image...overwhelmed by love...you want to tell him how you feel but you know that words can only say so much. So better to keep the anticipation for the morning. Maybe you will tell him, probably not...that is what it feels like.
"... & till morn comes, he won't be there anymore." Right? I guess so.
Sometimes, ah now-a-days, most of the times, one heart's oft. seemed to be "unspoken" because, the spirit'd speak the whole night itself so when morn comes, nothing seems to be left to share except "Morning Glory - Full Of Memories". Quiet fascinating concept you've come up with. Liked the choice of words as well.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
This derived from "that moment" when you know, when you just know, it's love. That's when the antic.. read moreThis derived from "that moment" when you know, when you just know, it's love. That's when the anticipation mounts, like a child waiting for Christmas morning. My God, I thought I would burst!! Thank you, Adams!
Kelly, beautifully done verse. Even the script you used here brings even more impact to your well chosen words. It can even be seen as the dream itself, in which he will awaken soon and reciprocate what is mutual...
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
...thank you for a most wonderful review, LaShaye!
Beautiful Kelly, those early morning days, your love sleeps by your side and you want to shout out loud your love but let her sleep a bit longer and take in the wonder of love, always a pleasure to read your lovely poems my friend :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Hi Richard, I hope you're doing well! Thank you for the warmth of your words, my friend!