I may never write an American novel,
or win a Pulitzer prize.
I may never see Paris in the spring
or smell sweetly
the golden Iowa wheat. But l shall love you…
And that is as clear to me as the Colorado mountains.
It is as pure to me as a Minnesota snow
and the perpetual rains that fall
in Seattle. And while you are near
with the brilliance of a million stars in the sky
l will hold you,
longer than the Pacific is deep.
I will treasure you more than any jewel,
and remain yours
far beyond the pyramids of time.
And l will love you.
That is as clear to me as the Colorado mountains.
As pure to me as a Minnesota snow.
Beautiful words for the emotion of love.
"That is as clear to me as the Colorado mountains.
As pure to me as a Minnesota snow."
Rare is pure and unbounded love. When we find it. Need to hold on tightly. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Your reviews always put me in a cognitive mood, John. Thank you so much, my friend.
A lovely write that sounded like you were saying your pledge, your promise to your lover. Just tell him to get it in writing from this page signed you lol:):) A heart felt poem straight from the hearty!!!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I'd give you Ayers rock but its just too heavy!
9 Years Ago
Isn't that one of the most impressive landmarks in Australia? Yeah, perhaps just a bit too heavy..... read moreIsn't that one of the most impressive landmarks in Australia? Yeah, perhaps just a bit too heavy...but it's the thought that counts! Thank you, Andrew! ; )
beautiful analogies, nice use of repetition for the last two lines....a dramatic love poem...a romance novel in several lines of a fine piece of writing...
this is such a gorgeous write, Kelly; it's romance in it's purest form, oozing throughout...love the similes and the metaphor, 'And while you are near/with the brilliance of a million stars in the sky' is stunning...your romantic side knows no bounds, my friend!!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
You are too kind, my lobster friend...and it thrills me beyond words...thank you! x