"The Fabric of Morning" I just love the title! Took me in and really liked how you used those fabrics (linens and brocades) to your advantage of incorporating them into the of awakening of a new day mingled with the memory of the night before. Lovely poem...
You have your own beautiful and unique style of writing that sparks my imagination instantly..I have nothing but absolute admiration of your dazzling infusion of words and interpretations. well done
I guess, am kinda beloved with such bewitched "Fabrics' Of Morn". Very detailed & deep!
My fav. lines: "Bodies merge, conversation blurs..."
The whole poetry's one of my fav. as well but the above line's seemed way beyond excellence/possession. It's portraying, how two souls get mingled with "one" having snores; sighs & melodic slight love-bites across the convos of night. The pic. that's being captured is ravishingly framed up with the glamour of lechery... that has potential to treasure your possessive/invoking poetic words.. well. I like how "Asher" shots or takes beautiful bollock naked shots of beautiful bare ones... He's for sure a womanizer spirit deep inside who better knows how to tickle women's bare heart & gently convincing 'em to do what he wants to. You must check out his website, he has got a few more shots:
https://instagram.com/basementfox/
Hope you'll find inspiration to write more on anew pics. I believe, what makes "Asher" cool is the way he has been in his past: "Musician". Even women love musician.. ain't they? Hell yeah, they do. And.. now Asher knows how to bash every woman's heart-beat with his productive talents.
Enjoyed reading your work. Excellent!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
One would never accuse you of being lost for words, my friend! Thank you for warming my soul!
You are the Goddess of intimate sensuality. This piece and the picture portray such wonderful, warm sensual moments.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Some just excite more than others...this one I knew right away, was special! ...and then I found th.. read moreSome just excite more than others...this one I knew right away, was special! ...and then I found the graphic! Thank you, dear John!
Kelly, the imagery you employ is so evocative I felt almost as if I was watching a documentary video...with so much subtlety and power...an acknowledged oxymoron. Just lovely, suitable for framing and hanging on the bedroom wall...where it will blend right in with the love that fills that room. Thank you for that! take care...dan
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Your insight into my writing always blows me away, Dan...what a kind and generous man you are! ...l.. read moreYour insight into my writing always blows me away, Dan...what a kind and generous man you are! ...love that avatar!
There is this thing that your poetry does to me as a reader...it's almost as if it is seducing me...luring me in to this tornado of emotion ...swooshing and swirling ...then depositing back in the calmness of the white lonely page...to wait until you seduce me again. I think your a siren! I'm so addicted :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I could wrap myself up within the warmth of your words...a thousand thank you's! x