No Way Out

no way out

 

 

 

…cerulean blue

were his eyes i fell into,

with no way out…

 

 

 

photography by Victor Bauer

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

These baby blues of mine help me to identify immediately with this poem, Kelly! Aces!

[Kelly Scheppers]

...aww, thank you so much!

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, those dang Baby Blues can have such power over us!! The pic is a great accompaniment to your words that tell it the way it is for one who becomes hypnotized by a great "pair".....LOL
Love this!!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Shelia. I think the "brown" ones did just as much damage to my heart!

[~]

Mmm.. those darn blue eyes!! Stealing heart after heart!
darling poem. I wish you safe staying ;)
xoxo

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm afraid it's a pool I've fallen into, too many times. Thank you, skits!

[~]

:) you are welcome darlin!!

[AaronFreitas]

If I was to stare into cerulean blue eyes I would probably be just as stuck :) Awesome wording my friend :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, my Cali neighbor! Is it hot enough where you are?

[AaronFreitas]

Oh it is way too hott! 107 tomorrow here... no fun :(

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and tempting words. Hard to escape when we are stolen by wanting eyes. Thank you Kelly for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kelly Scheppers]

The weight of your words is always welcoming, John...thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

I love your work Kelly. Always take me to a better place.

[GreenShoes]

These three little lines you have here say quite a bit.

Nice senryu! :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

...thanks, Karen! It's just a short piece...a syllable shy on the third line to be considered a senryu.

[....................]

Just because I love this so much, and also because you sent a read request while I was reading it, I will comment again: this is pure gold :D

[Kelly Scheppers]

This is so much better than a muffin, my Canadian friend...thank you! x

[....................]

hehe...I have fresh ones!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

eyes, my favorite feature of a person...and once we fall into them...there IS no way out...

[Kelly Scheppers]

...what a pool they are...many thanks, Jacob!

[andrew mitchell]

Kelly you made a mistake my eyes are hazel! How many times do I have to tell you! lol An exquisite write

[Kelly Scheppers]

Yes, you did, I'm SO sorry...I keep getting you and what's-his-name mixed up!!! ...thanks Andrew! xo

[Robert]

Oh this was a genuinely exquisite piece you have written Kelly......Please tell her to watch her cigarette though.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm not a smoker, but for some reason it snares my attention in photography. I guess it gives good atmosphere, wouldn't you agree? Thank you, Robert!

[Robert]

I agree Kelly.