No Way Out

no way out

 

 

 

…cerulean blue

were his eyes i fell into,

with no way out…

 

 

 

photography by Victor Bauer

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

LOVELY LADY WRITES OF LOVE SO FREELY IT MAKES ME SMILE IF ONLY FOR A LITTLE WHILE.

[daninstockholm]

lucky lucky him!! Wish it were me,, well written my dear,, says just enough and does it perfectly!!

Love the pic as well!!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Dan...I look forward to seeing you and your roses!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Are you falling again? You poor girl, writing great poetry yet can't stay on her feet.

Love,
Al

[Kelly Scheppers]

Lol, thanks for the laugh, my dear... ; )

[B]

Blue eyes are wicked dangerous
So freaking intoxicating

Its sick lol

[Kelly Scheppers]

My heart overwhelmingly agrees!

[B]

Its like you are walking happy listening to music totally cool
and then bam
and you are like

why
why
just tell me why

put on your freaking sunglasses
come on lol

[Relic]

I thought I had reviewed this one but I didn't. Some people put us under a spell with their eyes don't they? Its something you can't escape. You put this into words perfectly.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Tim. My eyes are different colors, by the way!

[Relic]

Really? I've heard of that but never saw anyone with it.

[Kelly Scheppers]

My right eye is hazel with flecks of brown...and my left eye is blue-green. My siblings all have brown eyes, and my parents eyes were green. Pretty cool, huh?

[Relic]

Yeah. Looking deep into your eyes must be cool. :)

[Blinded One]

I have no idea whar a senyru is....i thought elegant in simplicity

[Kelly Scheppers]

It's 3 lines of poetry with a 5/7/5/ syllable count. This was actually a syllable shy on the last line, but everybody thought it was one. Thank you for your review!

[Patricia Wedel]

Kelly... eyes of blue do draw one
into a world of passion and peace
where love abounds and has no
limitations except those in our
own mind.. A Senyru well versed.
truly, Pat

[Kelly Scheppers]

I think it's one syllable shy of being a senryu...still, your kindness touches my heart all the same!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A wonderful, evocative senyru full of passion and sensuality!

[Kelly Scheppers]

...the photo made me do it, what can I say! ; )

[Adam Adams]

Short. Yet simple, but extraordinarily pen'd up.

Very stunning & ravishing pic. you've pasted alongwith your very words. You ain't smoke but... seemed you wish to/long to or may be, only enjoy to... (in imagination with wilderness). I starred at the pic. ( got bashing beats bashed deep in may heart) & then read your caramel words deeply. Something possessive, unsaid or unspoken you've been captured/written in words which speak off your heart 'bout tenderness... some kinda true infatuated or love-vibes you've pondered in your poetry that's, of course, a greeting to your own delight feelings. Well written piece.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You overwhelm me, you really do! ...thank you! ; )

[Adam Adams]

Ah.. been so long to have ya overwhelmed. Glad to get back to your shadow/poetry.