Georgia Summers

 

Georgia Summers

 

 

Georgia summers

were as piquant as

a mint julep in July.

Languid days of skinny-dipping,

where temperatures were as high as

the traversing of hands

 underneath a skirt

of fettered gauze.

  

 

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You are a queen of the sensual verse Kelly. This is so enticing. Your words simply glow with desire. The picture and the words take the breath away. Oh to traverse!.................................I have been to Traverse City in Northern Michigan.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You are ever so kind, John. Thank you for such a lovely review!

[fattycbreezy52]

Steamy.Isn't it?
Such a wonderful description of Georgia Summers....Leaves the reader spell-bound.It seems as translucent as that fettered gauze and her beautiful skin.Lovely Kelly:)

[Kelly Scheppers]

...aww, thank you so much, Breezy girl!

[R Smith]

gotta love your steamy style Kelly, the summer heat, the cool waters and the silky thighs those hands traverse, sounds like summer bliss, your poetry is beautiful and sultry, sensuous and sexy, setting the shower to cold right now lol

[Kelly Scheppers]

Perhaps I should save some of that steam for when it gets colder, eh? You are such a dear, Richard, thank you!

[Kelsey Ann]

I like this one a lot (although I like all of your poems a lot). I had to look up 'piquant' & 'languid'. It reminded me of a movie called "My Summer of Love".

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm glad to have taught you two words...it's exciting when that happens, I love it! Thank you so much, Kelsey! ...cool avatar!

[andrew mitchell]

A sultry piece that reminded me of the movie The summer of 1942 for some reason just had a feel of mystery and the photo displayed the innocence, youth and carefree moments of the Bilitis movie

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed the sultry feel to this one, Andrew. Summer just seems to get to me that way! Many thanks my friend!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

big wow on the last four lines....sensual piece, but you just do this type of poetry so well....we feel the heat of July, the heat of the heart pumping blood into the sexual tension of the moment.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You do my heart proud, Jacob ...thank you!

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome descriptions Kelly... had to look up julep lol. I always love reading your words :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you for telling me that...I appreciate it, Aaron!

[Robert]

First the picture, very nice and intriguing. Also captures the heat of summer and anything to cool off. Anyone that has been in the south in summer will understand the words you so eloquently used in this piece of yours. I really did enjoyed reading this Kelly such a good job you did here. By the way I'm in Alabama at this very moment visiting in the heat of summer.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...thank you, Robert...hope you're enjoying Alabama...is it hot?

[Robert]

Oh yes it is but on the coast. So the ocean breeze is good.

[Relic]

~~This reflects a youth and passion that makes one yearn for those days along with you despite never having experienced it.~~

[Kelly Scheppers]

...that was my intent, thank you for seeing it!

[dan]

Aah, languid! One of my favorite descriptive words. Used so marvelously in this glimpse of summer love and lust. Be still my poetically beating heart. This is as good as it gets, Kelly. take care...dan

[Kelly Scheppers]

It is a great word, isn't it?...thank you, Dan!