...why thank you, I am thrilled you enjoyed it, SirMangosven! I do hope you don't have to walk arou.. read more...why thank you, I am thrilled you enjoyed it, SirMangosven! I do hope you don't have to walk around sideways! ; )
9 Years Ago
You're right that was too much work, I'm standing straight now :)
Oh yes.....blissfully romantic! I know you have posted this one in the past and I am so pleased you reposted it. I well remember the line, "the circumference of her mouth" .....fantastic! Lydi**
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I am flattered you remember it, Lydi, even though "that" Cafe seems eons ago! Thank you!
i think you are so good!! really!
"where the effulgence of sunlight
braided tendrils of copper hair,"
do you read your stuff!? :)
you rock the twist of an age old phrase and give us those two closing lines .. if i were not so undeserving .. (and old:) i would surely fall in love with you ... what a wonderful read .. bravo!
E.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
You, my friend, are my lucky charm...a thousand thank you's!
What an an amazing poem.
I am in love with the way you write and think.Such a beautiful picture,too
I like the entire word play specially the part where you have mentioned the effulgence.
Bravo:)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I am flattered and touched by your review, the kindness of your words...thank you!
Kelly, What a lovely picture with pinkish-brown hair and fair skin lady. Then the poem, love in very essence, eloquent, tender, happy, love. Truly nice.