Can't say I fully understand what's going on here, but it seems to say a lot in very few words, and it certainly sounds nice; isn't this the definition of poetry?!
Even the most mellifluous sound, like that of a nightingale's song, can cause the heart to break. I.. read moreEven the most mellifluous sound, like that of a nightingale's song, can cause the heart to break. It was kind of you to review, Roland...thank you so much! ...I really love those tulips!
9 Years Ago
Aw, thanks Kelly! A friend of mine took the picture outdoors at a restaurant in La Conner in Washing.. read moreAw, thanks Kelly! A friend of mine took the picture outdoors at a restaurant in La Conner in Washington State.
Words left unsaid seem to be always be the most powerful.
This is a beautifully written piece that has such an impact.
"I bleed muted words" - love that line. :]
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I think the line expresses the essence of a poet, and I'm considering it for a book title! Thank yo.. read moreI think the line expresses the essence of a poet, and I'm considering it for a book title! Thank you!
On almost every one of your writes I can barely get past the picture haha she is beautiful whoever she is :) Now to your words... just as beautiful as always :) "I bleed muted words"... I love that line... great write.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I'm very articulate about what I use. So glad you enjoy the finished product! Thank you!
Beautiful yet sorrowful senryu, Kelly... when a heart is broken even the sweet song of the nightingale is but a shrill reminder that love has gone... a wonderful write!
INTENSE! Few words with deep impact here, Kelly. To feel so dark that a nightingale's song impales you...
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
...thank you, Lynn! I read once that sometimes the deepest emotion shows itself in silence...perhap.. read more...thank you, Lynn! I read once that sometimes the deepest emotion shows itself in silence...perhaps it can be heard within the mellifluous sound of the nightingale, as well.
You are the nightingale who sings....knocking back into the light of loving feelings and whimsical proportions.
I am not sure if it is your phrasing, your simplicity, or just your essence that helps me remember .......but it works every time :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
...now there's a compliment I could wrap myself up in...thank you, a thousand thank you's!