I Bleed Muted Words

I Bleed Muted Words

A Poem by Kelly Scheppers
"

...a senryu

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I Bleed Muted Words

 

 

 

The Nightingale sings.

Its piercing shrill impales me.

I bleed muted words.

 

 

 

photography by Dimitre Caceaune

© 2015 Kelly Scheppers


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I'm in the u of muted wondering how......please how can I stop this hemorraghing. Wonderous as always!

Love,
Al

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kelly Scheppers

9 Years Ago

...thank you, Alfred! It's always a pleasure to hear from you!
dear Kelly, life can be painful but
beautiful poetry 🎼 🎭 truly, Pat

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kelly Scheppers

9 Years Ago

I would be lost if it were not for poetry! Thank you, Pat!
Can't say I fully understand what's going on here, but it seems to say a lot in very few words, and it certainly sounds nice; isn't this the definition of poetry?!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kelly Scheppers

9 Years Ago

Even the most mellifluous sound, like that of a nightingale's song, can cause the heart to break. I.. read more
Roland Petrov

9 Years Ago

Aw, thanks Kelly! A friend of mine took the picture outdoors at a restaurant in La Conner in Washing.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

9 Years Ago

...very nice!
Words left unsaid seem to be always be the most powerful.
This is a beautifully written piece that has such an impact.
"I bleed muted words" - love that line. :]

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kelly Scheppers

9 Years Ago

I think the line expresses the essence of a poet, and I'm considering it for a book title! Thank yo.. read more
GreenEyedPoet

9 Years Ago

I think that would be an awesome book title. :D
On almost every one of your writes I can barely get past the picture haha she is beautiful whoever she is :) Now to your words... just as beautiful as always :) "I bleed muted words"... I love that line... great write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kelly Scheppers

9 Years Ago

I'm very articulate about what I use. So glad you enjoy the finished product! Thank you!
The things we can not say. Great write, Kelly!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kelly Scheppers

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Lara! Nice to meet you!
Clara

9 Years Ago

We've met before! ;)
Kelly Scheppers

9 Years Ago

Yes, I see that now. We need to catch up!
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Oh, what inconsolable words, what heart-rending imagery. The melancholia of this piece has transfixed me too. Powerful write dear friend!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kelly Scheppers

9 Years Ago

...you've single-handedly made my day! ..but then again, you usually do! ; )
Beautiful yet sorrowful senryu, Kelly... when a heart is broken even the sweet song of the nightingale is but a shrill reminder that love has gone... a wonderful write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kelly Scheppers

9 Years Ago

...thank you for that, Thomas!
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9 Years Ago

always... :) ... T
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INTENSE! Few words with deep impact here, Kelly. To feel so dark that a nightingale's song impales you...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kelly Scheppers

9 Years Ago

...thank you, Lynn! I read once that sometimes the deepest emotion shows itself in silence...perhap.. read more
...

9 Years Ago

:))) yes ma'am...perhaps it can
You are the nightingale who sings....knocking back into the light of loving feelings and whimsical proportions.
I am not sure if it is your phrasing, your simplicity, or just your essence that helps me remember .......but it works every time :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kelly Scheppers

9 Years Ago

...now there's a compliment I could wrap myself up in...thank you, a thousand thank you's!

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Added on June 3, 2015
Last Updated on June 3, 2015
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Kelly Scheppers
Kelly Scheppers

San Diego, CA



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