I Bleed Muted Words

...a senryu

I Bleed Muted Words

 

 

 

The Nightingale sings.

Its piercing shrill impales me.

I bleed muted words.

 

 

 

photography by Dimitre Caceaune

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

SImply beautiful.....it is a sobering sound when what once was soothing can become painful......these words put a lovely but aching picture in my mind two :( :( but three :) :) :) :D

[Kelly Scheppers]

I appreciate your kindness, SV! ...thank you!

[Blotted Ink Productions]

Very awesome. Love the title.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Ruslan. It's my book title...and quite possibly an epitaph for my grave.

[Koudoha Essi Anne-Marie]

This is truly beautiful. i love it.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I deeply appreciate your kindness...thank you!

[Koudoha Essi Anne-Marie]

you are most welcome

[Heartful5160]

Great work! I love how it's so dramatic! Keep Writing!

[Kelly Scheppers]

...thank you!

[Heartful5160]

Your welcome!

[sinNsincerity]

Even beauty can slay!
I love this Kelly!

[Kelly Scheppers]

...that was the connotation of this! ...thank you for seeing it!

[sinNsincerity]

It was my pleasure!

[costa siwale]

Sweet poetry, short and captivating.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am happy you enjoyed it, Costa!

[costa siwale]

i sure did

[ANTO]

The envy of the bird's freedom to sing to its hearts content, is matched here only by the magnitude of the inability to do the same by the narrator Kelly. What a contrast and such a contrasting image too. Very deep this one Kelly.
Thanks for sharing. :))

[Kelly Scheppers]

Like many here, I have fallen in love with the "senryu". Your reviews always give me cause to smile, Anto...thank you!

[Adam Adams]

And here, your muted & so regal words "impale" the flesh of my heart as well. Very deep insights you have dear... Kelly. I ain't think that i've ever read 'Senryu' from you before, but as saying goes, "there's a always a first time" so, it's quite true enough, there's always a first to read. "I Bleed Muted Words" - the title has its own anticipation of perfection that catches the visual of thoughts through air. Wonderful work as always!

[Kelly Scheppers]

You have brightened my day...thank you, Adams!

[Adam Adams]

Honored to make even your heart brightened as well!
Mind me asking, what's your real passion to write away.. Poetry? Haiku? Or.. now this one: Senryu? I wonder, if there's anything more you've hidden in your very hands in the pursuit of new talents?