Loves Me Not

Loves Me Not 

 

 

My heart

unequivocally

would break

if he

loved me not…   

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

delightful! ... if it were only that easy ... i would simply keep picking flowers eh!? ;)
such a heart immersed in love as yours should not be at risk ... love your poems .. love your thoughts .. very much enjoyed the teetering blade of fear your poem places me on ... we know what a broken heart means don't we ;)
E.

[Kelly Scheppers]

"...the teetering blade of fear"...yes, we all pretty much know what a broken heart feels like. I am moved by your perception, E. A thousand thank-you's!!

[Einstein Noodle]

so many poets to hug!! hope you feel it! :))

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A love like yours will not be measured in terms of which petal remains... but the thought of him not loving you would be heartbreaking... love this, Kelly - words and pictures... it brings back childhood memories :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

This picture truly does speak volumes, doesn't it? Your reviews do as well, for me, Thomas!

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always my pleasure, Kelly... :)

[ANTO]

such a finality to the word 'unequivocally' - unequal vocally - unable to give voice to - the depth of pain that would ensue from such a sad realisation. I have saw people completely destroyed by that revelation, od all ages and circumstances - they just couldnt' proceed in the knowledge.
great piece Kelly.
Thanks for the RR.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Actually, I was leaning with the definition of "leaving no doubt", and I wanted the clarity to come through. I always look forward to what you have to say, Anto...thank you!

[emmajoy]

Point made so very clearly .. yet whispered. Wonderful!

[Kelly Scheppers]

...I am blessed to have you here, Emma...thank you so much!

[emmajoy]

My pleasure :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Simple and effective and full of cyclic emotion Kelly. Love the photo!

[Kelly Scheppers]

...thank you, John. The weight of your words always stir me!

[sereenaoutloud]

love this. What girls hasn't sat with the little daisy and pulled a petal one at a time hoping for it last petal to be "he loves me" lol!! such beautifully penned words and a great photo to match!! :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

...what girl, indeed! perhaps boys did it too, and we just didn't know! Thank you, Sereena!

[AaronFreitas]

Beautifully worded Kelly :) But who wouldn't love you... :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

...that's for another poem! Lol, thank you, Aaron!

[andrew mitchell]

Superbly done in a San Diego style reminiscence of the finest poets going around Kelly S

[Kelly Scheppers]

...there you go again, sending me into those ethereal heights...my best, Andrew!

[Jamestown]

Simply beautiful!
Amazing picture to mirror the words:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Kelly Scheppers]

...and thank you for your blessings, Jamestown!

[Robert]

Kelly, Excellent choose of words is this short but very descriptive piece. Nicely done and thank you for sharing.

[Kelly Scheppers]

The pleasure is mine, in having you here, Robert! ...thank you!

[Robert]

Sorry on the typos, I was on my phone ugh.