Loves Me Not

Loves Me Not 

 

 

My heart

unequivocally

would break

if he

loved me not…   

Reviews

[Trace]

Stack the deck.
Dont let him pull more than one petal.
"He loves me".............

Trace

[Kelly Scheppers]

Point well taken, Trace...I should stop while I'm ahead!

[Trace]

Kind of reminded me of that line in a country song:
"How many flowers have to die to prove how much I love you"

[SleeplessVolcano]

Wow....lovely! Small world, just used a similar picture in a poem I posted a few minutes ago....:)

We may only have one heart, but in a lifetime, the "broken" status occurs more often than what we actually care to admit.......mmmmm.....I would say our heart's ability to break, is our most human quality :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

I overwhelmingly agree...thank you so much!

[Richard🖌]

Whew, Kelly!
Your title scared me — for a moment I'd thought you were saying "that special someone" loves you not, and I can't begin to imagine who would be nutty enough to do that … I should have known better! ; )

Having read your poem, I know I can relax, because I am quite sure he is totally smitten with you … I mean, what lucky guy wouldn't be!

I love it!
Now, quit torturing those sweet daisies … LOL!
Big hugs of warmest affection, Dear Kelly, for scaring my pants off!!! ~ Richard

[Kelly Scheppers]

I have miniature daisies in my garden...perhaps I should say "had"! Your intuitive nature touches my heart, Richard...deeply. Thank you!

[Richard🖌]

As yours touches mine, Kelly … you are truly welcome~*

[CD Campbell]

You have a ton of petals to go through before you get the answer. A bittersweet but lovely work. CD

[Kelly Scheppers]

..thank you, CD. ...much appreciate your reviews!

[B]

It's so funny
I was doing this today .... last time i did that i was 12
And i got an answer
Only i used a leaf
not a flower ......

[Kelly Scheppers]

It must be a girl thing...immune of age! Thank you, Nisreenaa!

[dan]

The heart that has never been broken has most likely never been touched. The message in this poem speaks to a situation that too many of us have experienced. A very beautiful piece. take care...dan

[Kelly Scheppers]

I know its brief, but I wanted to put a spin to the tale of the ole "he loves me, he loves me not", and this picture just brought it to its fruition. Thank you, Dan!

[Alfred Kukitz]

in perfect Schepperesque ease we find all the difficulty in the short poignant dream in her words.

love,

al

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Alfred! ...hmmm, "Schepperesque"...I like that! ; )

[Adam Adams]

Again, you fired a every sharp arrow of love right at into the core of my heart with your kisses/warmth (left in words) that ripped an every vibe of its flesh apart... with peace. Beautiful & emotional words you stir with thoughts. Yes, it's very hard to find true love once it's gone so, it's always better to appreciate what one has got in his hands before it's left gone. I'm very well sure, he keeps you into the bucket of his heart & tease you all night so as even you take long deep breaths to breathe more with sensuality & the pleasure of real nice love. Well pen'd. Nice imagery!

[Kelly Scheppers]

...endearing words, my friend! Thank you!

[Adam Adams]

Of course, they are.
You & your writes deserve such words.
...been a pleasure to me even to "Study" you, whole.

[R Smith]

perfect Kelly, simply a delightful poem that speaks volumes for your heart and love.....i'll bet he does love you, otherwise he'll be a fool :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Richard...how kind of you to say!