Loves Me Not

Loves Me Not 

 

 

My heart

unequivocally

would break

if he

loved me not…   

Reviews

[Ayvid N]

So much said in such few words. "unequivocally" is the key word here. No half measures for the heart.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I lost the original photo and had to re-post another. It's one of my briefest pieces, but has a monumental effect upon the heart. I am thrilled you enjoyed it! Many blessings dear Divya!

[Ayvid N]

it was a pleasure, dear friend.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

As long as it’s not love me never... wonderful🌹

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm holding onto love me tender all the way!

[SmittyJas]

Nice hope he responds positively.

[alf]

Oh that is so sad!!!! I loved that you conveyed so much emotion in this simplistic form!!!! Brought a tear, and a pang to my heart, quite honestly. Wow!! Emotional, alf

[Kelly Scheppers]

...what a dear man you are, Alf! x

[Neville]

Found at random and then deliberately stored away in my personal favorwrites to peek again at when I so choose.... All Good Things, Neville

[Kelly Scheppers]

...feel free to peek, anytime, Neville...thank you!

[Neville]

My pleasure entirely, N

[MinorArt]

I feel like a beautiful, tragic song could be made just of these words...something in a Bob Dylan and Daughter style.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I adore this one, partly for its brevity...I am so glad you enjoyed it, Maria! ...thank you!

[Anne Verona]

Few words, but says a lot. This is a great... Beautiful poem indeed. And tragic as well. This has got to be one of the most painful moments one has got to live, being haunted by unrequited love.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...so true, Anne. But look at the rewards we reap! Thank you for reviewing...nice to meet you!

[Anne Verona]

And that is one truth of life indeed! No problem :) And nice to meet you too :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The simple words and thoughts mean everything for love. Beautiful artwork and good words dear Kelly. Thank you Kelly for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kelly Scheppers]

...thank you, dearest John!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Kelly.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

intense short piece, here.

couldn't have said it any better.

j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

The graphic simply pulled me in, after I sat and stared at it for a couple of minutes. I don't know if writing such short pieces is a sign of anything, but it's like a second nature for me to do. I'm happy you saw the intensity I did, Jacob! Thank you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

well you know me....my philosophy is always, "less is more"

[Lydia Shutter]

Awwww.....innocent and very mature all at the same time. Charming. Lydi**

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am thrilled to have your take on such a brief piece...thank you, Lydi!