I wrote this in 2002 for my three cats... Jessie, Milo & Elliott. Jessie & Milo have since died. Jessie, from the ripe old age of 19, and Milo from a respiratory infection. This is my tabby, Elliott, who will be 17 years old next month! { He has two other partners now...Willow & Izzy.} I love my cats...they are like children to me, a part of my family!
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I notice You are quit the photographer from your camera photo on another site we both are members of. This is very cute I love your used of photography,
Anyone who so loves cats cannot be all bad … not that You, Dear Kelly, are any bad. : )
The names you blessed your darling felines with, I love.
Mine are a black and white angora female, Bingo, a pure white shorthair female, with one brown and one blue eye, Lily, and a huge black medium-hair tom, Pepper. They're all around 12-years-old, and live solely outside (by choice) … they won't even step indoors … cat independence i am sure you are familiar with, eh?
When they die, it hurts like hell, as they live on in the heart and mind, having become a viable and intricate part of us.
I love how you've portrayed Elliot, his comfort and indifference to the world, and your hard work … LOL!
You're a lovely person, Kelly, thank you for sharing You … hugs! ~ Richard
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I adore cats, how wonderful that you have three! Animals give great insight to a person's character.. read moreI adore cats, how wonderful that you have three! Animals give great insight to a person's character. They take a lot of commitment, love and nurturing...just like a child. Bingo, Lily and Pepper...I shall remember their names, fondly with your's!
My sister always has two children, currently Bear and Julius. My parents adopted a stray cat, but that one is scared of the vacuum cleaner and runs away whenever she hears it. Your poem has a tanka quality about it; in fact, I think I can do it for you:
Oblivious to a Just Vacuumed Room
morning sun peers through
an east window perfectly
curling tabby cat
upon futon chair he sleeps
twitching whiskers, twitching feet
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I love learning the names other people name their cats! Thank you for the tanka version of my poem,.. read moreI love learning the names other people name their cats! Thank you for the tanka version of my poem, Roland. I like it!
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Aahh, what a lovely tribute to your cat!♥ I think cats are pretty much oblivious to whatever they choose to ignore, and what they don't ignore they seriously investigate. What a life, I wish I could do that and have someone vacuum my carpets!! ;o)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I know, really! I think the house could shake and he would sleep right through it! ...thank you, S.. read moreI know, really! I think the house could shake and he would sleep right through it! ...thank you, Suzy!
I love animals. So uncomplicated and dedicated. A wonderful pic and poem, Kelly
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I had a menagerie of everything growing up, and I wouldn't want to live in a house without one! Tha.. read moreI had a menagerie of everything growing up, and I wouldn't want to live in a house without one! Thank you for your kind reply, Lynn!
that is the picture of serenity ... God bless you for being such a fine steward of your "children" .. to be so long lived is testimony to you Kelly ... well done says i!! my Bella is also such a pampered guest ... ;)
E.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Wherever would we be without the love of our four-legged friends? Thank you, my dear E!
Can't say I'm a cat lover but this one looks cute, and I liked your tribute to your pets...I have a dog called Milo and he's a real little character.
Will
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
My heart just did a somersault...two times over! Thank you, my dear friend!
Ahh, blissful and contented, sooo cute :) Gave me a sunny smile for a rainy day here...as I type this, my cat has curled on the sofa and oblivious to anything but a warm seat lol Cats are more than cats, animals more than animals, they are our companions and babies ;) I so understand that...all of mine have my heart wrapped around their tiny paws lol ♥
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
There's nothing like the heart of an animal lover...thank you, Poppy! x
This one really resonated with me, as a relatively new cat "parent". My son recently moved back in with me, and along with him, came his adopted cat, Beck. I fell almost instantly in love.....
I sometimes watch Beck as he naps in the sunlight, and this piece captures that so wonderfully.
Nice write.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
It's always amazed me how cats can melt the heart of a man! Thank you, Rubie!