Speak To Me

Speak to me peacefully

And I'll give you a piece of me

Talk to me like a human being

Then we can write a song to sing

 

We can share words

Speak on this that and the third

Fill the air with adjectives, nouns and verbs

Forget about silence yo I wanna be heard

 

Rap to me openly

Argue with me truthfully

Don't be afraid to speak

About anything and everything

 

What are your dreams and aspirations?

What's your inspirations

I'm curious to know so just let it flow

For the sake of conversation

 

See here between me and you

Every subject is on the menu

Be it moral, be it sinful

I'm not easily embarrassed so nothings taboo

 

Just pick a conversation piece

We can engage in a verbal feast

Anything from sex to the weather in the northeast

Share thoughts just to say the least

Reviews

[Brandon]

Nice rhyme. Flowed well. But it didn't have a overall feeling. It was fresh but when I was finished I didn't look back. You have talent though.

[James K. Blaylock]

I really enjoyed this piece. And it has such a wonderful flow.

[Sean M. Addams]

very interesting piece ... love the rhyme in this. great job on this one

[Andrew Augustine]

I usually don't like rap because it's become muddled over the years but this is an inspirational poem with allot of heart. Keep up the good job.

[ah]

this is great, thanx for asking me to read, keep writing

[Rain]

You know..My son sings Rap, but I can never understand what he says. When I see your words written, they make a lot of sense. Rain..

[desertraven]

I really enjoy the flow of this piece. It seems effortless. Well done.
Sandra

[Nick Erickson]

There was a change in the poems atmosphere as I read it through. It started emotional - loving and ended on friendly terms. Well written.

[TL Boehm]

the first part of this poem is romantic and almost 'beautiful' - then it changes a bit - becoming more conversational...and ending with a smile. A warm, friendly write. Nicely done.

[Kathryn]

This was really wonderful; i loved it. It's a little different and very powerful and just overall a great work. Excellent job! :D I really love reading your poetry; a lot of it really hits home for me. Keep up the writing; i LOVE to red it! ♥

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