Speak To Me

Speak to me peacefully

And I'll give you a piece of me

Talk to me like a human being

Then we can write a song to sing

 

We can share words

Speak on this that and the third

Fill the air with adjectives, nouns and verbs

Forget about silence yo I wanna be heard

 

Rap to me openly

Argue with me truthfully

Don't be afraid to speak

About anything and everything

 

What are your dreams and aspirations?

What's your inspirations

I'm curious to know so just let it flow

For the sake of conversation

 

See here between me and you

Every subject is on the menu

Be it moral, be it sinful

I'm not easily embarrassed so nothings taboo

 

Just pick a conversation piece

We can engage in a verbal feast

Anything from sex to the weather in the northeast

Share thoughts just to say the least

Reviews

[Abysmal Savant]

I like your flow, this is what I was in the mood to read when I came Across It, had to look it up and down like it was Acrostic. You have great wordplay, I gotta check some more of your work out- props

[RAWR!]

its so lyrical it sings out.
very nice write :)
i like it the way it is
thank you for sharing

[Kayleen]

very cool. i like the first 2 lines best. it has a really good flow, it went to a beat while i was reading it.

[wolfshrew]

it was clever and it just worked

[emma]

My favourite part.

'Speak to me peacefully
And I'll give you a piece of me'

It set the scene and just dragged me right in. Your words flowed effortlessly.

Isn't this what we all want to hear? That someone wants listen, to talk, to communicate openly and honestly.

You definitely got me thinking!

[Lady V]

I like the flow of this piece. Great job. It really appeals to what it is that A woman wants in a man. Someone to listen and take charge at times. Great that there is an open mindedness to the whole piece.

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

[Katherine Wyatt]

I do believe that this is truly what most people really want from their relationships..honesty..and communication...wonderful flow to it..Great write!

[Dusky]

Love the idea this in this poem, but I picked out two things - in the first stanza, shouldn't it be piece instead of piece? And in the 4th, "What's your inspirations" should probably be "What are you inspirations" or "What's you inspiration". Other than that I liked it, especially the verbal feast line. That was a lovely image.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

This was a great write. The beat is on point, I could hear your voice reciting it. this write is full of energy and life. Well done.

[Brette Medb]

The flow was perfect! It grabbed my attention right away and I loved the openness of the whole piece. A true and honest soul who can speak of anything and hold nothing back. Great write.


Brette