Luna thy Elanra....

to my friend Elanra from Turkey

Luna thy Elanra,


Beware, she sheds white tears
the pangs of betrayal she clears,
Her first love forgets she never
clad in white mourns for ever;
maddens poor hearts in the night
monthly once she shines bright,
takes the form of beloved first
shouldn't you know this ?you must!
perpetual desire always she is
a celebrity loved in maternal land,
still a lovely barren miss
tempts the sea to embrace strand,
father of storms she lures with a kiss
makes him fool on spongy sand.........



Mukesh Raval
Palanpur
India[23/01/2010]

Author's Note

Its for you . Elanra means the Moon light in Turkish Language as Luna means in Greek the Moon........

Reviews

[Elanra]

Thank you so much.. I guess its the first time someone ever dedicated a poem to me... Just to fix one thing Elanra is a name I made up, my real name is Elmira and it means Moonlight.

Thank you tho. I'll cherish this always. And I also have to say, this is a fantastic poem. I can hardly believe such a beautiful poem came out of something which is supposed to be dedicated on me.... and me is a loser :P

Tesekkur ederim. (in Turkish.. thank u)

[Alicante lullaby]

lovely,
tempts the sea to embrace strand,
father of storms she lures with a kiss,
makes him fool of spongy sand,
witty use of words,,,,,water's temptation to caress moon,,,,,