THE FORBIDDEN MOON

THE FORBIDDEN MOON

A Poem by Mukeshkumar Mafatlal Raval
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A 21st century problem of allergy is brightly analysed. a newer theme but in older bottle of poetry.

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THE FORBIDDEN MOON

Hidden was there the light bright
The knowledge true,deep and right,
Eternally proven and absolute
cursed was I stood too mute;
Dared not touch,the fear
of being kiss dead,the sheer
beauty was there on guard,
her mark left on every card;
From within it kills,the deadly kiss,
bargained knowledge,did hardly miss,
slept in a peace,eternal bliss.
Again in the morn the Eden was cool,
tempted me to walk on forbidden moon,
alert and agile she kissed me soon.


Palanpur
India. [Gujarat]
30/11/2009.

© 2010 Mukeshkumar Mafatlal Raval


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brilliant imagery that jumps onto the reader, lovely title,,,,its intriguing,,,,temptation and fear,,,giving it a legendery hue,,,great work,Kumar sahib,,,

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Mukeshkumar Mafatlal Raval
Mukeshkumar Mafatlal Raval

Palanpur, Gujarat, India



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Being a nature lover and mountain trekker I love poems too.They are part of my life.Besides I am a student and teacher of English literature too. Always keeping my eyes open to life and wandering like.. more..

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