A point of light

I am drowning and no one can safe me.
There is no hand for me to reach.
My head is half under water .
Struggling to breath.
I fell in a deep dark hole and i don't see any light.
I can't find my way out.
I am blind. I am lost.
I am crawling.And i'm scared.
wide awake inside my dream.
Twisting and turning in a storm.
Blisters and cut on my skin ain't as deep the stab in my heart.
I am begging for help but no one hears me.
I am screaming but nobody understands.
They don't see me.
I am invisible.
I am shaking.
I am waiting for some kind of glue to fix my cracks.
A hand to hold.
A soul to sing a long , to cry , to laugh , to share the last breath.

Reviews

[Devesh]

The last lines were great! You do need to work a bit on the grammar though, for example, in the first line, you should've used "save" instead of "safe". Apart from those tiny mistakes, good effort! :)

[Muchypuu]

Aww haha i just realized it now. Thankyou!! :)

[Devesh]

You're most welcome :)