What If...

 

What if I could turn back time…

I’d go back to yesterday and try harder.

What if I knew that yesterday was our last time…

 I’d kiss you passionately and never let go.

What if my kiss wasn’t enough…

I’d tell you I love you totally and completely.

What if I love you needed more…

Then I’d give you my heart, body and soul. 

What if those were all broken pieces…

I’d ask you to accept me as I am. 

What if you accept me…

Then I’d promise to treasure you every single day.

What if my promise required commitment…

I’d say my heart is in your hand, I have nothing more.

 

February 28, 2009

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

That's a question I ask myself all the time. Indeed, "what if" we could back up just a little and do things different?---I'd be spinning my wheels in reverse right now. Very poignant and poetic, Serendipity.

[Ron Reardon]

Wow. Amazing!

[Glee]

Very touching piece, loved it.

[Seriana]

Oh sweetie....my heart aches and aches when I read this. I feel like I've been sucker-punched. Such pain, such longing, such wishing to go back. I'm sorry for whatever led to this write, but I do hope time will heal your wounds. Thank you for sharing your words in this time of need. :)

[H. G. ROBERT]

Excellent, heartfelt write. Love the handwriting style, nice touch.

[Samantha Grace]

I really liked this. It flowed excellently! GREAT write!!!