Verbal Diarrhea

Inspired by Erotic Goddess

 

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Poems by an Irish B***h - Verbal Diarrhea
A Poem by Erotic Goddess
 

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I’m sorry if my complaints

are causing you grief,

but I wonder have you

never complained before.

 

It’s not a routine

you make it sound

like its everyday,

well it is not.

 

I’m in a black mood,

I’m sorry to be raining

all over your lovely,

bright and blue day.

 

But no one is forcing you

to listen to my rants and raves,

let alone asking you

to read what I write.

 

I’ve made my choice

and its none of

your business

the decision I’ve made.

 

So just leave me alone,

let me be because

I’m not going anywhere

you’ll just have deal with it. 

 

So go on and

do what you want

enjoy the rest of you day

as I will enjoy mine.

 

May 18, 2008

Reviews

[PoetryXpressions]

I said this exact same thing to a ex -friend of mine a few weeks ago. I was going through some rough times and needed alone time and space she didn't like hearing that and told me we could no longer be friends because she cared and I didn't...told her to grow up and well you can see what happened ( ex friend) Wish people would understand that sometimes it 's what a person needs...not everything is always about them. Nice write , truly enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

[Annebelle Ashire]

Well said,
loved this piece.

I felt like this yesterday - completely peeved that "they" could not just leave me be,
they had to ask why - and then they regret, wishing they never asked.

But this is where curiosity killed the cat, isn't it?
Or in this case, interest.

I liked this very much.
Shows true anger as well as annoyance and a bit of humor.

~*AC*~

[Jacquelene Vanessa More..]

hell yea! speak your mind. you are definatley no pipsqueak! i feel like this sometimes too. i enjoy the simplicity of it all yet it speaks so loudly!

[Erotic Goddess]

So go on and
do what you want
enjoy the rest of you day
as I will enjoy mine.

Girl, tell it!!! :-) I love this, it's the perfect response! Great write and great job getting it off your chest.

Love,
Stephanie

[No One Important]

Well said...if you do not like what I have to say, then by all means, walk away!!! Very good, Angel, very good!!!