A Single Tear

Just wishing I knew. What your heart ... truly desires.

  

A single tear

Just one

Falling down

As I think

Of you

 

My heart hurts

Needing you

Wanting you

How I wish

For you

 

My heart wonders

Do you

Need me

Or is it

A game

 

I wonder if

I will

Ever know

What your heart

Truly desires

 

Another tear falls

As I

Impatiently wait

For the one

... I love

 

Those words unknown

To me

How could

You break me

My heart

 

Sitting here alone

I wonder

What this

Heart ache means

To me

 

My last tear

Will not

Cry again

For you or

Anyone else

 

Goodbye my love

It was

Simply amazing

Will never forget

Your love

 

March 18, 2008

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Arthur Henn]

My arms are open to hold you
wanting to hold you,
let me take the weight off your shoulders.

Its OK to be a little broken
I'm the mirror you look into
Now turn yourself around, look into another
One thats whole, seeing a new soul of happiness.

like the desert flowers
these storm clouds that follow you
full of rain, holding your tears
let them nourish, cleansing you.

The love of your life is here
be patient, don't be in a hurry
among all the desert flowers
he will be found.

No longer alone, you will smile
Once again.

(((Hugs)))

I just wrote this as a comment for another. My heart wants to share it here too. Hang in there.

[Star-Runner]

Such a heartbreak of a write, but ever so beautifully written, This touched me.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is so beautifully written despite it's heartbreaking subject... it's hard when someone we share so much with and love suddenly leaves and we are left with questions... Where did it go wrong? Did they ever really love me? I have been here myself and could feel that your pain as I reflect on mine... Great work!!

[larryb]

So nice very well done, A+

[Dawn Jones]

You speak my heart as clearly as if you were me. I love sharing misery....

[Sally Edwards]

Wow, beautiful powerful poem, dripping with the agony of being alone, without your love, so poignant and moving, smooth reading, it brought tears to my eyes,