My Already Broken Heart

Jorio - four lines with four words in each line.

What are you doing

Trying hard to break

My already broken heart

It cannot cry anymore

 

March 14, 2008

 

Reviews

[Mr. Lopez]

It bleeds , it burns, it breaks and it blesses, but the heart also heals to love another day. Short and sweet.

[Star-Runner]

Short and to the point well put, like this.

[Imperfection]

Broken hearts come up with the best kind of poetry.
This was an example.

Well written.