Message in a Bottle

To my sweetheart,

 

I don't know when you will get this.

But I hope this message finds you soon.

I have not stopped thinking about you.

Your words are imprinted in my heart.

I am lost in a daydream of you.

Waiting patiently for your return.

Wondering when you will get here.

To our secluded spot deep in the woods.

The moon hides behind dark clouds.

The night is so eerie without you.

The cabin is so cold in your absence.

The candles have burned out.

The fire is almost gone.

I am waiting patiently for you.

I can't help but cry fearing the worst.

My heart can't take another night.

In this place, completely alone.

Without you by my side.

Please find me my sweetheart.

I need you to survive.

But as I write all this.

I wonder, do you feel the same?

Does your heart love me?

Like mine loves you.

Until your return, I will hope.

I will dream of your gentleness.

I will love you with my words.

Can you see how much I do?

 

Yours ... Truly, deeply.

 

March 12, 2008

 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Simply beautiful, like the sunrise after a bitter cold night. I could not help but feel as if I had stumbled across your note and read something so personal and deep. Wondering as well what would happen next; hoping you would write of the response. So profound and pure. Only wish there was more....

[Ron Reardon]

I can fel the tenderness in this. A lucky guy if you mean it for someone...

[Imperfection]

Full of longingness and love.
The description of the woods, burned out candle, the moon behind the clouds is fantastic. I can very well picture the scene.

I noticed a single error- Wondering when you will you'll get here.

Wonderful write.

[Lorraine Pearson]

This is sweet...and I love the creative touch that the font adds! Love and longing...but then always wondering if the lover feels the same. Nice write.
~Lorraiyne

[Erotic Goddess]

Until your return, I will hope.
I will dream of your gentleness.
I will love you with my words.
Can you see how much I do?

Ah, such a sweet message my friend. This is melancholy and hopeful at the same time. I love to read your writing cause there is always such a wealth of feeling in it. Thanks for sharing this.

Love,
Stephanie