Endless Road

Endless Road

A Poem by Serendipity
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I don't know how long it is

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© 2008 Serendipity


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Wow this is extremely exquisite with a question of hope in search of that one love that you know is out there and just hope your on the right road. A classic piece and the pic is a nice touch, a keeper for me.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah, such a melody, such modesty... I should admit, don't know why this piece just brought a smile and moan at the same time. Very lovely poem. Well done :)))

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Nice picture and verse. Very good questions...never truly answered it seems. Always a progressive, or digressive work.

Too brief, too soon ended.

Forest

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well that was a letter to the stranger out there looking for you. Wonder who that could be. The Missing Heart of We. It's a familiar scream. I scream. Were you Screaming at me? Hello..ello...elo.lo.o......o..o. Echo.

But no seriously? I liked it. A lot. Nstuff. just a bit messed up.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


At times, the road does seem endless. Sometimes, turns out to be true, in fact.
This was beautifully expressed. Loved your choice of words. Each one seems perfectly in place.

Nice picture too.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 19, 2008
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Serendipity
Serendipity

Sunny, CA



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