Tired

 

i’m feeling down

exhausted and disappointed

 

wishing it was aLl over

wondering when it will end

 

waiting fOr the light

at the end of the tunnel

 

have you eVer felt that way

like nothing makes sense

 

you try and try and try some more

but everything you do is usEless

 

when do you stop trying

when do you give up

 

i’m tired of trying

i tHink its time to give up

 

my mind and heart can’t take it

my body and soUl are worn out

 

this feeling, this numbness

its indescribable, it huRts

 

i’m going to go now

inTo a deep sleep

 

in hopeS of finding the light

if I ever wake up

 

i guess its just a part of life

all I know is I’m feeling down

 

December 17, 2007

 

Reviews

[The Lady]

I loved this one!! I found myself sadly relating to this. Very well written and I love the hidden message.

The Lady

[Brette Medb]

I know the feeling and I think you did a great job describing it and I loved the hidden message inside the poem, it brought out everything you were trying to say. Great write and I wish you good luck in the contest.


Brette

[Dawn Jones]

I've been here too. Just too tired to do anything but sleep and yet no matter how much physical rest you get you're just still so tired. Well written.

[Requiem]

Not too sure how I feel about the last line... You do have a thing for putting a hidden message in the poem, lol. Anywho. Thanks for entering my 'tired' contest and good luck to you!