I Am MomA Poem by SerendipityIn ten lines; this describes who I am as a person.
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Beautiful. There is "nothing" like being a mother. It's different than even being a father. I've witnessed your piece first hand. Son falls down..Mom, dashes to her child, Dad's say "Get up. you're ok." The emotion you put in this is ancient. Not that father's don't love, but there is something mystical about a Mother's love.
I want my wife to read this. I loved it. Rain.. Posted 16 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
This one is awesome. I love it! I'm not a mom, though I wish to be passionately, but my mom is Glory and this fits her wonderfully. Thank you for putting it all into words so well.
Posted 16 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
Ha! How true... I've had this very situation myself, tonight! Succinct and filled with drama. Perfect.
Posted 16 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
Oh!!! What an ode and tribute to mom, to children, to the future they give us. This was short and sweet and I enjoyed the simplicity of the piece! :)
xxoxx Posted 16 Years Ago2 of 2 people found this review constructive. |
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Added on February 6, 2008
Last Updated on January 6, 2022
4 Reviews
Added on February 6, 2008
Last Updated on January 6, 2022
Author
Serendipity
Sunny, CA
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