The Differences

This is my day ... This is how I feel ... This is what I portray ... These are the differences.

THIS IS MY DAY

The sun is out

The clouds are out

Its sunny and bright

Its gloomy and dark

Like a beautiful spring day

Like a cold winter night

 

THIS IS HOW I FEEL

I am laughing

I am crying

My world is smiling

My world is frowning

I am living a dream

I am living a nightmare

 

THIS IS WHAT I PORTRAY

I am under control

I am confused

I am alive

I am lifeless

I am at peace

I am at war

 

THESE ARE THE DIFFERENCES

Between my life

Between my heart

The whole woman

My broken soul

What you see

What you don’t

 

October 19, 2007

 

Reviews

[An Ordinary Woman]

Wow!!!!!!!!!!! Where the heck are the reviews on this???

This is fabulous, it's brilliant!

I love the message, I can relate, I often feel the same, wondering how I can smile yet be unhappy on the inside. I think what the difference is, is hope. Always hoping ....

Not very often I come across a writing that simply excites me, just like this, I love it. I think the gray and black compliments it sooo much! Yay, go you!

I hope you wouldnt mind if I link to it?

[James K. Blaylock]

Wow, I truly loved this piece! Aww... to always have a million thoughts and emotions flowing at any given moment. That truly is, what it is to be human. At least this was my take on this wonderful write. Thanks so much to An Ordinary Woman (Tamara) for sharing it with me. And thanks to you for writing such a great poem.