Wow!!!!!!!!!!! Where the heck are the reviews on this???
This is fabulous, it's brilliant!
I love the message, I can relate, I often feel the same, wondering how I can smile yet be unhappy on the inside. I think what the difference is, is hope. Always hoping ....
Not very often I come across a writing that simply excites me, just like this, I love it. I think the gray and black compliments it sooo much! Yay, go you!
You drift so vividly back and forth, and in and out of your subtle appearace and your quaking soul. In such contrast you paint a picture of so many of us hanging on the edge of our lives, wishing we were so much more than our mere appearance... Brilliant...
The dichotomy of your words speaks to me in ways I have never before seen nor felt...I am spellbound by the many layers alluded to in the piece. I may even go as far as saying I am baffled as to how wondrous a poem as this could have eluded my reading before...Brava, miss Serendipity, brava!!!
It is hard to know what a person is going through. What you see is often not what it is. And what it is may not always reveal itself.
Sometimes it is hard to even get in touch with one's own feelings. You don't know whether you're happy that you've landed a new job or whether you're sad that the job will take you to a city away from your loved ones.
Life is complex. I do REALIZE that but I still don't completely UNDERSTAND it.
I found this poem extremely relatable.
Great!! At first I thought it was two different people in two different places. Explanation ending of one woman whole or broken....Hasn't that been each of us at times. I like the use of the colors to add to the mood of each line. You even thought of using blue for the heading of each....clever.
This is amazing. I wondered all the way through what made the difference. Finding at the end the polarity of the life and heart; whole woman, broken soul. Well, that's just extraordinary.
What we do...A Poem by Erotic Goddess
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i am just a girl who
LOVES to WRITE
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Love Starts with a Smile,
Grows with a Kiss,
& Ends with a Tear.
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