Chapter 4: Preparing for our First Date

Chapter 4: Preparing for our First Date

A Chapter by Eden Maple<3

Ok we're out. Abby got bored so she set us free after about 3 hours! When i thought the awkward feeling and discussion were over, i realized we would have to talk about where, when, what time and all the details about our date. Our first and maybe only date. But what if its not our only date, what if i like our first date? What if i want more? I hate this feeling but its so warm and cozy.

"So... what did you want to do on our date?" Max asks.
"What date!?" Abby chimes in.
"We have a date, he asked me, i said yes. So we have a date." im over using the word 'date'.
"OOOOOHHHHHH!!!!!" Abby is getting all fuzzy and excited. its funny.
"Oh shut up." I needed to say that.
"So.. i was hoping we could discuss the details... in private." He glares at Christian and Abby.
"Ohh fine! but Lexi, you have to fill me in later." Abby requests.
"And why should i? so you can stalk us and ruin the date?" She probably would do that...
"Nooo just so i can determine its romantic vibe." whatever...

"Soo... where did you want to go?" Max asks again.
"Oh um, the beach?' The beach has always been my first impression of my first date. I always think of the beach.
"Oh sounds nice, great idea. So the beach. Which beach?" He asks.
"Oh um, Pebble beach?" I suggest.
"awesome, so Pebble beach, when? and What time should i pick you up?" Questions questions questions.
"ummm, This Saturday?" i suggest again.
"perfect, time?" hopefully the last question.
"Oh um whatever's good with you." i just got lazy.
"Ok how about 9am, it takes about 2 hours to get to the beach, and then we can have the rest of the day to ourselves." He's such a planning man, haha.
"Kk, so i'll see you Saturday." im trying to end the conversation.
"K, bye." and before he goes he kisses me on the cheek.
I GET THE MOST SENSATIONAL WARM FEELING! I feel like i've melted.

 

"Hey so what's going on!? where are you two going for the date, if it's not romantic enough i will have to choose a new location for you two lovebirds to settle down." Oh Abby, i highly doubt you out of all people would know such romantic places.

"We're going to Pebble Beach on Saturday." i say.

"Oh i quess it will do, for a first date." she says.

"You know that it could be our last." I say sorta unsure.

"WHAT! NOOO NOOO! YOU WILL HAVE MANY DATES TO COME!" shes yelling at me, more of a threat than a response.

"We'll see." i say, hoping to shut her up for now.

"Ok but we have to go shopping for your first date, you must be irrisistable!" she yells at me. so now i shall be yanked off to the mall, for shopping, to impress a guy on my first date.

So we're at the mall, shopping. I hate all of Abby's favorite stores, so i ditch her and run off to mine. Hot Topic :)

"Ewwww what are you doing here!" Abby barks at me.

"Uhm...shopping?" i say.

"Not in ths store!" She tells me.

"Well why not, they have cute clothes, just because i don't shop at GAP or your little girl stores doesn't mean i have no style by shopping at this store." i say.

"Well i still dont approve!" She's being all fussy.

"C'mon, just look at the clothes and im sure you will take some liking to them." i say.

"fine, i'll look."

so 10 minutes later she's rushing me into a changing room, throwing clothes to me left and right, and i barely have time to breath. that's when i find this dress, it's a perfect dress with cute silver studs on it and it has 2 thin straps holding it up, its black with zippers and im in love with this dress.

"Oh please, that's not for the beach, that will be for your second date" Abby says, grinning.

"Ok, so what should i wear to the beach?" i ask. So Abby hands me a pear of grey jean short shorts, and a black tank top that says "MUSIC=LIFE". i must say, this is a pretty cute outfit. i smile at the sight of it, rip it out of her hands, and run to the check out counter.

"Ok! so now that we have outfits for date 1 and date 2, we're set. now Saturday is tomorrow, and you need to get your beauty sleep, so go go, sleep!" she commands me.

"But its only 7:30pm." i say.

"then put your ipod in and listen to music to calm you until 9pm, then go to sleep." she gives me orders and i go home.

 

Saturday

Abby is about to knock down my door, so i quickly get dressed in the outfit i got yesterday, and rush downstairs to let Abby in.

"OH MY GOSH YOU LOOK TOO CUTE! NOW LET ME DO YOUR MAKE-UP!" she screams in my face.

"Uh no thanks, i can do my own make-up." i say.

"Uh well NO! ITS YOUR FIRST DATE! I NEED THE HONOR OF DOING YOUR MAKE-UP FOR YOUR FIRST DATE!" she yells again.

" You already helped me with my outfit." i say.

"well i need both honors so go go." and she shoves me into the bathroom. She runs into my room and grabsmy makeup case.

"What time is he picking you up?" She asks.

"9am." i respond.

"OH MY I HAVE BARELY ANY TIME TO DO YOUR MAKE-UP! WHY DIDN'T YOU LET ME KNOW IN ADVANCE!?"" shes all pissy again.

"Because i sorta thought i was doing my make-up." i say honestly.

"Ok well i guess i will just have to make do." she says calming down.

20 minutes later shes done. i look in the mirror and i dont even recognize myself, im actually really excited now. I look amazing! i have to thank her.

"THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!" i yell.

"awww no problem... you gave me decent bone structure to work with so, you get some credit." she smiles and so do i.

*door bell rings*

" OHHHH ITS HIM ITS HIM!!!" shes beeming with excitment and so am i, on the inside.

 


 



© 2012 Eden Maple<3


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nice write =]

Posted 12 Years Ago


Alright. I had to stop reading for a moment. My eyes got lost whenever your charchters spoke to each other. Could you possibly space them out a bit so I could continue reading this WONDERFUL story?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Loved this :) But if Lexi were me I would have told Abby "No." and that would be the end of the coversation. I still loved the whole consept of Abby wanting to help so badly tho :) Nice job!

~Destiny

Posted 12 Years Ago


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hahaha "Abby is about to knock down my door" hahah nice chapter, nice book. :)

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hi im eden maple, i love writing, birds, reading, filling my mind wth music,and the hunger games. i am of 16 years of age and live in nevada. my best friend is Destiny Crawford, shes very talented. ho.. more..

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